Fic- Gather No Moss - Part 1 of 2

[pirl]

Title: Gather No Moss
Author: pirl
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: not mine,yadda yadda
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Noah

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Comments

[123cariad]

That was a fabulous chapter love Javier Mama ,, Javi not so much after that Phone call lol thought he was to good to be true lol

Glad Luke has his number now xx He need to bring out the Snyder now and kick Javi into touch xx

[pirl]

Thanks! I love Javier's mom too! I know a lot of women like her.

[seajellybaby]

Why oh why do I be the distinct impression Luke is about to make a gigantic ass out of himself?

Oh... Wait!!! Because he's Luke!! He can't help himself!! LOL!

Fabulous chapter! Absolutely love how comfortable Noah is! It's clear he's found a great life for himself! I adore Jav! What a great friend and brilliant creation by you! The relationship between Jav and Noah is beautiful! They really care about each other!

I also love Brett of course! I'm sure I've met one or two women like that before! You'd think being Lucinda's grandson Luke would be used to that!

[pirl]

Why oh why do I be the distinct impression Luke is about to make a gigantic ass out of himself?

Because deep down I'm a sadistic bitch? Yepyep.

Oh... Wait!!! Because he's Luke!! He can't help himself!! LOL!

Well, there's that too. ;)

I'm so glad you like my original characters. It's always a gamble in fic, imho, so it's awesome to know that they're appreciated. Thanks!!

[asonearth]

what a fantastic chapter.. love all the characters here and the background you set.. and i love Luke.. his character is so torn here.. on moment heaven the next you think he's back in hell... Noah and Javi have a beautiful freindship here and Javi's mom just add to that. so i wonder what was this phono call about... and for the record.. would like to see those pictures ;) thanks for writing <3 Annette

[pirl]

The pictures are based on a photoshoot Jake did a long time ago... minus the hottie making out with him of course. ;)

I love Javi so much, and I'm so glad others like him as well. Thanks for reading!

[wheelie47]

Great start! Love that Noah has built a life for himself.

Peggy's wonderful and I love your Brett.

Javi was beginning to grow on me til that telephone call. Uh oh - sounds like there's trouble ahead!

[pirl]

Thanks! I wanted Noah to build something he was proud of.

And I'm saying NOTHING about Javi and the phone call... ;)