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Fic- Gather No Moss - Part 2 of 2

Sep 05, 2012 06:32

Title: Gather No Moss
Author: pirl
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: not mine,yadda yadda
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Noah

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( Gather No Moss - Part 2 )

fic, bigbang, nuke

Comments 20

sln188 September 17 2012, 01:00:54 UTC

What a great follow up! The Nuke love just grew throughout. Thanks!

pirl September 18 2012, 03:49:08 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad their emotions read well and weren't all in my head. ;)

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pirl September 18 2012, 03:53:53 UTC

Hee! Thanks sweetie! I'm glad the sequel was well received. You never know... sometimes I felt like I was only writing it for myself. I'm ecstatic you loved it! ^__^

newhaven183 September 18 2012, 03:48:35 UTC

"I thought about how I wanted you to make fun of me watching reality shows. About arguing over which movie to go see and me sneaking onions into the pizza order." Noah's face scrunched up at the mention of onions. "I thought about getting you Gatorade and popsicles for when you're sick and signing our Christmas cards together. About you nagging me about my hair getting too long and bringing you to my AA meetings. I want to buy crunchy peanut butter and outrageously expensive coffee and have you be the first person I call when anything happens, good or bad. Every day I want to wake up and see your face, sheet-wrinkled and beautiful," Luke reached out to caress Noah's cheek, his voice now heavy with emotion. "I want that, I want this, for the rest of my life ( ... )

pirl September 18 2012, 03:59:07 UTC

Awwwwwww!!! Thanks sweetie! I'll make a huge virtual raspberry pie for the boys to smear and lick off each other. Would that be okay?

BB 2013? Errr..... um..... ???? Let me think on that for a few months. ;)

Thanks for the applause!

asonearth September 18 2012, 17:33:17 UTC

loved this story and all the characters here.. I understood where Luke was coming from.. to see Noah so happy in this circle of acquaintances, building his own life.. i can understand the fear if Luke gets to fit in.. this was a very diffrent situation. i like Javi here, he brought it to the point.. Noah could never love him the way he loves Luke.. and well Noah sure grew up a lot and i liked Luke's analogy here to this christmas card and Noah not able to get a word out right and now he finds all the right things to say.. This was an awesome follow up to your story!! Thanks <3 Annette

pirl October 28 2012, 01:41:35 UTC

I felt strongly that Noah needed to come into his own without Luke to influence him, etc. That was a large motivation for this story. That, and I wanted to write Javi. ;) Also making Luke the fish out of water is a nice change of events.

So glad you like it! Thanks for reading!

wheelie47 September 21 2012, 15:44:09 UTC

Excellent story and a great follow up!

Oops what a mistake to make, Luke! But I kinda like him being all over protective and macho.

The lovemaking scene was perfect!

And you had me going there with the baby ;)

Yay for a spring wedding at the farm.

Congrats on a excellent story and thanks or sharing.

pirl October 28 2012, 01:46:46 UTC

Excellent story and a great follow up!

Thanks!

Oops what a mistake to make, Luke! But I kinda like him being all over protective and macho.

Me too! Such a hothead...

The lovemaking scene was perfect!

Meep! Thanks! It's not my writing comfort zone for sure.

And you had me going there with the baby ;)

Yay!!

Yay for a spring wedding at the farm.

Congrats on a excellent story and thanks or sharing.

Thank you and thanks for reading!!