[EXO] Migratory Patterns (1/1)
Title: Migratory Patterns
Fandom: EXO
Author: chiharu
Characters/pairing: Lu Han centric
Rating: G
wordcount: ~5,000
Summary: What Lu Han has his eyes on is a dream; a dream that leads him back to the beginning of beginnings. Lu Han + EXO fic
( They begin a ritual of singing together after that, bursting into song when their paths cross. They serenade each other next to the water coolers and in front of bathrooms, Jongdae matching Lu Han’s intonation as they repeat the same lines from the chorus. They ignore Zitao’s groans and bewildered looks from trainees until every note change in “What Is Love” is etched into Lu Han’s memory, until Baekhyun and Kyungsoo join in on their duet in the elevator one day, and until Jongdae goes from following Lu Han to leading him in the chorus. )
Fandom: EXO
Author: chiharu
Characters/pairing: Lu Han centric
Rating: G
wordcount: ~5,000
Summary: What Lu Han has his eyes on is a dream; a dream that leads him back to the beginning of beginnings. Lu Han + EXO fic
( They begin a ritual of singing together after that, bursting into song when their paths cross. They serenade each other next to the water coolers and in front of bathrooms, Jongdae matching Lu Han’s intonation as they repeat the same lines from the chorus. They ignore Zitao’s groans and bewildered looks from trainees until every note change in “What Is Love” is etched into Lu Han’s memory, until Baekhyun and Kyungsoo join in on their duet in the elevator one day, and until Jongdae goes from following Lu Han to leading him in the chorus. )
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ps i think you meant tudou in your a/n because you mentioned tudou not youku lmfao.
also mandatory WHO IS XIYING
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i love the luhan-ness of this fic. biased girl is biased oTL
everything just seems so realistic here. i love the whole dynamic between the members and luhan. it's really cute how you made the whole exo friendship gradual, and i guess that's what makes this fic extremely precious. ;~; /sobbing
and also, the background story about luhan's family and his life in school is just genius. <3 i can really see it happening. XD
your writing is also very lovely btw. :D
great job! i hope you write more! ^___^ luhanxeveryone is always a thumbs up
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Thanks for reading!
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I think you just have a soft spot for Chinese boys
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But seriously, this is just so. idk. It's touching and endearing and a little heartbreaking in more than one place. I love that it's a character study - but it's also a group study, and you take the time to develop Lu Han and his place among these other displaced boys. You are so good at evoking a mood and getting all the little details right; in five thousand words, you've managed to say so much.
Ugh, that moment when they watch K dance and there's that "we're screwed" stone sinking in your stomach reaction. And then Yixing, in the hospital and what he says to Lu Han - and ghdighrjgivhjig how delicately you fleshed Lu Han out so that his ~weirdness~ is kind of a defense and a weak spot all at once - and Yixing presses down in it like a fresh bruise figbfighgjgignjf
I hate you, I hope you know. I am trying so hard not to get attached to these bbs. ToT
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And yeahhh, I tried painting a less harmonic picture of the relationship between K and M, but they all ended up derping around instead TT.TT
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