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parametre June 9 2012, 23:23:15 UTC
I LOVE JONGDAE.

/scampers off to read

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parametre June 9 2012, 23:32:49 UTC
ohmygod, this is amazing.

you highlighted so many things i've noticed, and i love how you explored the underlying issues with the members, and, just, sjdlsadnasfa.

i have so many feels for this.

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chiharu June 10 2012, 01:06:13 UTC
Yes, yes. Please accept my Chen feels!

Thanks for reading!

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herocountry June 10 2012, 00:11:23 UTC
THIS IS SUCH GOOD TIMING BECAUSE I RECENTLY REDISCOVERED MY CHEN FEELINGS YESTERDAY. i had a really tender spot for him in the beginning, but then prolonged lack of material dulled that until I was starting to be like zzzz chen, but then disneyland confirmed him as part of chingu line so I HAD to love him, and luckily all the happy camp/SMT stuff is making it so easy <3 <3 THIS WAS SO CUTE AND FUNNY, i love your band interactions always, and i loved the whole members one by one adding themselves to the stairwell *___*

Minseok laughing as they dissect second-handed jokes that eluded them during the day. omg I really liked this line, probably bc it's one of those things that have never occurred to me but feel totally like, 'yeah!!' CUTE AS FUCK? these two against the world, awww. also L O L “What do the Chinese do?” Jongdae asks. / “Fuck if I know,” Minseok grins, causing Jongdae to laugh.

Lu Han looks up - a rare moment in which he actually looks older, wiser. “Jongdae-ah. I learned Korean because I wanted to.” i really liked this ( ... )

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chiharu June 10 2012, 00:57:14 UTC
Yes. YES ACCEPT ALL YOUR CHEN FEELS!! I have so many feelings for him after Disney. HIS SMILE WAS SO PRECIOUS, I WANTED TO HUG HIM. Yet I kept sitting here, waiting for someone to write Jongdae fic. IT WAS A FRUITLESS WAIT ;~;

Oh, it's definitely chenmin (+ translator noona!) against the world, alright. AND! Fandom needs more layhan/xinglu tbh. This is another pairing I will probably have to end up writing myself ;A; AND YES. I BET MINSEOK IS A REALLY COMPLEX CHARACTER TOO. Oh god, another band member fandom is seriously lacking fic for.

Your comments are always so cute! Thanks for reading!

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sparksfly7 June 10 2012, 00:15:55 UTC
HOW DO YOU MAKE ME LOVE A CHEN-CENTRIC FIC?!

I mean, I like him, he's cute and has an amazing voice and it's so adorable how him (and Xiu Min) try so hard to learn Chinese, but I just...I never thought I would read a 4000-word fic about him. UNTIL YOU WROTE ONE.

I. Love. This. It's sad how Jongdae struggles with Chinese and how he's trading the best years of his life to lip-sync to songs he doesn’t understand, but the other M members are so adorable. Minseok especially, ofc, but Yixing's such a sweetheart (the defending Jongdae part, be still my heart), Lu Han is adorably evil (I just knew he would be under that face), Zitao is like this kung fu panda that I want to squish (no connection to the movie), and Wu Fan is...just the perfect dui zhang, really. HIS GEISHA MASK AND CLAY THINGY - OH MY GOD, I DIEDand as usual, your food references and little details about airports and Korean vs. Chinese and all those things that really bring the setting to life are perfect. whenever I read your fics, I feel like I'm getting a look into EXO's ( ... )

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chiharu June 10 2012, 01:05:39 UTC
PLEASE LOVE CHENGZI! He needs more stans and writers!

BEAUTY ISN'T EASY OKAY. RESPECT DUI ZHANG'S DEDICATION TO HIS COMPLEXION. And lol I'm starting to think you're only reading for the food references now!

Shades of Jade! Updates for that series will come a little slower, b/c collaboration is tough! That fic will probably span the entire summer.

Ohhh fixing that part. Thanks for reading!

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sparksfly7 June 10 2012, 01:52:54 UTC
ChengZI? o.O Suho needs more too and that's what I'm doing ♥ maybe I'll write a Chen fic one day...maybe.

Kris' skin is really perfect though...maybe I should try his beauty secrets too :P

LOL. I'm reading because I ♥ your writing :)

it's going to be a good summer...

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chiharu June 10 2012, 01:55:24 UTC
Yep! Chen said that the Chinese fans on baidu call him chengzi or orange! You can mmm read more about it here.

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one_if_by_land June 10 2012, 00:24:11 UTC
THIS IS SO LOVELY!!! I love it whenever you write bandfic!! ♥ The set-up is so great, and you've really captured what Chen and Xiumin must mean to each other, as fellow misplaced Koreans in EXO-M/China. It's so unfortunate that both of them have been so limited by the language and cultural barriers. :(

I'M TOTALLY STARRY-EYED OVER ALL OF YOUR -M ANTICS. *__* Lu Han's mischievous streak! DUIZHANG'S BEAUTY REGIMENT. Swapping sweets as currency in a stairwell, ahhh, and I legit let out a sound of delight at the fake hawthorn story (tanghulu is one of my favorite street snacks, too).

Wu Fan, reading something at his desk, looks annoyed at the intrusion. He does, however, point to Lu Han’s bed at the other end of the room. Yixing is rolling under Lu Han’s covers, still clad in sweaty dance clothes. Lu Han yells something in Chinese and descends upon Yixing ( ... )

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chiharu June 10 2012, 01:10:09 UTC
Oh wow I just realized that's Pi and Ryo in your icon!!

I always liked tanghulu with other fruits inside! CHINESE STREET SNACKS ARE THE BEST.

Also! I wasn't sure if I was pushing the xinglu bromance too much, but I'm glad it worked out! And yeahhh I took some creative liberties with Jongdae's back story. LET'S HOPE CANON DOESN'T CONTRACT ME TOO MUCH.

Thanks for reading!

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anonymous June 10 2012, 00:57:32 UTC
Love Chen, and love this! All the characterization was really fun and distinct. Xiumin was my favorite! But gosh, that line about lip-syncing to songs he doesn't understand. So sad because its so true. Chen needs to sing live more, he's too good not to.

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chiharu June 10 2012, 01:13:37 UTC
Yes! His Chinese duet with Wook in Taiwan was so pretty ;~;

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