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[EXO] 独生子; Only Son (1/1)

Jul 14, 2012 00:58

Title: 独生子; Only Son
Fandom: EXO
Author: chiharu
Characters/pairing: Kris centric
Rating: G
wordcount: ~ 4.5k
Summary: Kris tries to grasp what it means to be a leader, an idol, and a son. Leadership doesn't come naturally, but friendship and camaraderie do. Kris + EXO-M fic.

( Beijing is blazing and humid, causing the back of Wu Fan's shirt to stick to his body. Their idol status affords them air conditioning that Wu Fan has long since forfeited during his summers in China, back when dusty fans and cold mung bean soup were the only remedies for the sun. )

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Comments 52

one_if_by_land July 14 2012, 14:32:30 UTC

I've been on the biggest duizhang kick lately, so it was so delightful to wake up to this fic!! I love it when you write character-centric fics, because you're so good at paying attention to small details and rounding off everyone's personalities to give them such nice depth and dimension. Even almost throwaway lines like The occasional defiance is what Wu Fan likes the most about them. Lu Han and Yixing display a lack of reliance that persists through debut made me pause and go, oh, that's a great way of describing their dynamic.

I HOPE YOU NEVER STOP HAVING CHINA FEELS, because reading your -M fics gives me the biggest whiplash of nostalgia and childhood memories. Zitao and Yixing arguing about whether to eat zongzi in June! JELLY CUPS! Zhimahu for breakfast! Suddenly I feel all homesick?? (Take responsibility, chiharu...)

The way you set up the dichotomy between Kris and Joonmyun was v insightful, and I liked how you showed their differing leading styles and strategies (There are times when Wu Fan wants to trade with Joonmyun, ( ... )

chiharu July 14 2012, 23:50:29 UTC

Xinglufan ot3 is my favorite :(( Chinese Golden Trio Y/Y? I shed a sad tear for my fellow shipmates.

Come to China with me!! We can be total tourists, eat all the food, and queue outside of EXO events with ugly banners in hopes of getting a whiff of potpourri!Kris.

Thanks for reading!

one_if_by_land July 14 2012, 23:55:43 UTC

I NEED SO MUCH CHINESE OT3, YOU HAVE NO IDEA. (I'd also settle for general China-line.) Selukai was the original triangle ship that I latched onto (hard) and I still love it, but recently all I can think about is Xinglufan, orz.

tsunagatte July 14 2012, 16:03:39 UTC

THIS IS GOING TO BE MY FIRST EXO FIC. (True kiyuharu friendship here. You should feel honoured!!)

tsunagatte July 14 2012, 16:35:42 UTC

I like this. Now I need to read more :3
(I'm going to fail my mcat orz)

chiharu July 14 2012, 23:53:00 UTC

READ DAT PIMP POST!! And then go here ;)

p.s. I like Chiyumi more?

p.s.s. Good luck on your MCATS!!! But reading fic probably serves as a good study break, says... myself.

tsunagatte July 15 2012, 17:18:48 UTC

Hai, working on it! If I don't comment on a fic it's cuz I'm reading on my phone~!

p.s. then Chiyumi it is :D

p.s.s. Thank youuuuu! omg I'll need, it, THREE WEEKS LEFT D: But yes, fic reading, manga reading, fbing, etc all good breaks :p

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r_hr_maniac July 14 2012, 20:35:23 UTC

I love your China fics. I just...I don't really have feels for China since I know next to nothing about it but I have feels for them in China and damn you're just good, okay, I'll shut up.

chiharu July 15 2012, 01:38:08 UTC

My China feels didn't resurface until EXO-M fandom ;~; I blame Lu Han for being from Beijing!

Thank you for reading!

envybleedsgreen July 14 2012, 21:35:33 UTC

I really love this. :X

chiharu July 15 2012, 01:33:17 UTC

Thank you for reading!

paradisist July 14 2012, 22:44:45 UTC

This was extremely well written and kris here feels so real. Love this so much, you're a really good writer. One of the best. <3

chiharu July 14 2012, 23:59:45 UTC

You're too sweet! Thanks for reading!