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[EXO] File 32: Murder at the Sunset Mansion (1/1)

Nov 24, 2012 13:31

Title: File 32: Murder at the Sunset Mansion
Fandom: EXO
Author: chiharu
Characters/pairing: Kris/Yixing
Rating: PG
Wordcount: ~7k
Summary: College detective Kris Wu goes on vacation with his childhood friend Zhang Yixing, but murders just seem to follow him everywhere he goes. Detective Conan!Au.

( “Nobody move or touch anything else,” Kris says, halting Lu Han from kneeling to the victim's side. His voice comes out louder than expected. Even Soojung, who previously had her face buried in her hands, looks up as everyone stares at him. Kris knows he is taking a leap of faith, but there is a voice whispering in his head and directing the course of his thoughts. “This is not a suicide,” Kris decides. “This is a locked room murder.” )

exo, detective conan, omg what is this

Comments 104

flameflowerful November 25 2012, 04:03:20 UTC

ohyeahhhhh i loved it!
;D
that was just great
you put in just enough clues for me to be able to kind of guess at the real culprit but not feeling sure at the same time ^^ love that this is krislay too :D
hehe wow it's been awhile since i've gone back to conan.

chiharu November 25 2012, 05:31:45 UTC

I only check up on Conan updates whenever Heiji or KID show up, but with the creation of the Magic Kaitou side series... idk man :( CONAN. MOVE FORTH WITH YOUR PLOT ALREADY!!

I'm glad you enjoyed the clues! They were fun for me to plot/write. Ty for reading!!

k8tunnie November 25 2012, 04:23:57 UTC

KRISLAY IN CONAN!AU ;A;

SOBBING FOREVER BECAUSE THIS IS PERFECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And Luhan fits the role of Kaitou really really much <33333333333333

Thanks for this awesomeness oh gosh <3333333

chiharu November 25 2012, 05:33:12 UTC

I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT?!!!!! kkkk Kaitou 0420 is the best part of this fic, rivaling the 2 sentences of Chanyeol in the preview :')

thanks for your enthusiasm and thanks for reading!

yoonlove November 25 2012, 04:45:58 UTC

No words can describe how amazing this fic was and omg do you have more?! I am totally checking out everything you have because exo in the DC universe is just too amazingly good to pass up. I loveddddd DC back in highschool and omg I just love murder mysterious so good and I'm sorry my brain is too fried right now to form a proper comment /is dead

chiharu November 25 2012, 05:00:24 UTC

Do I have more... Exo fics??

I'm glad you liked it! Ty for reading!

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chiharu November 25 2012, 05:39:35 UTC

No way Jose. I don't have enough plot bunnies to write a detective novel u___u This is just a DC spin off :')

Ty for reading!

choamma November 25 2012, 06:02:46 UTC

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/INCOHERENT
YOU THERE! WHAT A BRILLIANT AUTHOR!
ok since i'm a big big fan of DETECTIVE CONAN and i'm a kray shipper (even krislayhan ot3 shipper) i read AND MUST COMMENT to this fic
OHMYYYYYY YOU EVEN GAVE LINK TO THE SOUNDTRACKS /DIE
chanyeol as heiji!!!!!!!!!! i can't even imagine that GAWD ;;
"this is locked room murder." >> it's the common case in conan don't you think so?
OTL kaitou kid--the 1412 and you changed it into 0420 and was flirting to yixing, who became Ran here. isn't it kid's hobby :))
"there is only one truth" >> HOW CAN I DUNNO WHOSE LINE IS IT. AAAAARRRRGGGHHHHHH YOU DRIVE ME CRAZY YOU KNOW. take responsibility! MAKE A SEQUEL! ;;

choamma November 25 2012, 06:22:25 UTC

i should add: i am familiar with "why did you tell everyone to call police instead of ambulance at the first place" :)) really indeed i loooove your fic.

chiharu November 25 2012, 06:26:44 UTC

haha yes. I was trying to cover as many dc tropes as possible. :') how could I not add in a locked room murder and Shinichi's catch phrase? kkk I'm glad you enjoyed Lu Han as Kid! You're right, though! He does take too much pleasure in flirting with Ran! omo I wrote that in completely subconsciously!

/pets you. yes unnir will take responsibility for your feels.

thank you for reading!

choamma November 25 2012, 07:12:48 UTC

you're most welcome :) fyi, i re-read your fic again anad again. really was written in detail i guess :') Lu Han suits kaito kid well you know, his playful habit~ hahaha.
again, thanks for this fic. i love you author-nim <3