Most of you can disregard this, I just needed a copy of it at home (I'm at school). Just a brief, sad story. Read at your own discretion
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This is an attempt at countering a citique I recieved by a playwriting teacher of last year, one that I took to heart. My stories lack a confidant almost all of the time. As you can see, if you read the story, I failed again. I suppose I am doomed to solidarity.
This story isn't about anyone in particular. In the initial story concept, I based the "you" character off of a friend of mine from Sycamore, but that story involved a gun and a long road trip. Instead, this is just the story of an emotion. Solitude.
i like this story alot. The new ending is very good :) I still say your really good at imitating authors..but like i said you put your own style into it and make it your own.
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad an objective reader can recognize my style as a specific style. That's important to me. If there's one thing too many writers lack, it's a style to call their own.
Not saying mine is fully developed, or even worth recognizing, but I think it's there and I'm glad someone else can see it.
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This story isn't about anyone in particular. In the initial story concept, I based the "you" character off of a friend of mine from Sycamore, but that story involved a gun and a long road trip. Instead, this is just the story of an emotion. Solitude.
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Not saying mine is fully developed, or even worth recognizing, but I think it's there and I'm glad someone else can see it.
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