Wow, you managed to make this both sad and rather comical/snarky. Sad because... House is honestly setting himself up for depression (well, something to that extent) and Wilson seems to be steadily trying to detach himself.
Still love it, of course. I also adored House's description of sex. Totally and completely cracked me up.
... This isn't all I wanted to say but I'm way too tired for my own good. Sorry if I didn't do a decent job of explaining myself!
*g* nooo.. you did a good job! thank you! you flatter me, that's for sure. thank you for reading. *runs* now for the part where house tailspins into depression only he knows about and wilson angsting over parenthood.
i don't like my angst so much, cause it makes them look like... too angsty.... but i'll try.
thanks for the comments, and please keep 'em coming. anything that can make the fic better is always welcome! *g*
Your dialogue is a lot better in this chapter. Great work. Sorry I didn't respond to your comment on the last chapter asking for specific examples. Couldn't find an e-mail address for you, and I didn't want to bore anybody who might be reading your comments with a long dissection of three sentences of your story.
I'd be happy to work with you, if you're still interested. If you drop a comment at my blog (http://eyeroll.net) and include your e-mail, then I'll know how to find you.
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Still love it, of course. I also adored House's description of sex. Totally and completely cracked me up.
... This isn't all I wanted to say but I'm way too tired for my own good. Sorry if I didn't do a decent job of explaining myself!
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i don't like my angst so much, cause it makes them look like... too angsty.... but i'll try.
thanks for the comments, and please keep 'em coming. anything that can make the fic better is always welcome! *g*
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I'd be happy to work with you, if you're still interested. If you drop a comment at my blog (http://eyeroll.net) and include your e-mail, then I'll know how to find you.
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thank you!
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your kid might just have three daddies and a mommy.
This line just got me. Poor Wilson is angst-ing and I'm cracking up.
Anyway, excellent job. Good dialogue, too. ;) *Thumbs up*. Can't wait for the next part.
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the next part is... weird. i'm almost afraid. i'm not a medical doctor by any length of imagination, but hey! *g*
thank you for your kind words! i'll try to do better...
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