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Aug 21, 2005 21:21

Title: 'The Other End of the Rainbow'
Pairing: Nick/Greg (CSI)
Rating: NC-17 for squicky things.
Summary: Two deaths and one very long night.

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The field is dead... )

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byrons_brain August 21 2005, 20:59:37 UTC
great story.... very heartfelt...

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pitza August 21 2005, 21:55:08 UTC
*g* thank you.... depressing as it is... *g*

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serenity151979 August 21 2005, 21:12:09 UTC
I think you've broken my heart. I don't really know what else to say, this was one of those pieces that sticks you like a knife, yet moves you like no other fic can. It's so brutal and dark and painful almost to the point of being horrific, and yet there is a real truth to it, because yes, this might just be the way it is. And I'm jealous of you and your capacity to make me feel these things just through the words that come from your head and your ability to convey it to paper (or pixels in this case!) You amaze me. God.

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pitza August 21 2005, 21:56:59 UTC
*g* thank you! wow! that's high praise coming from you!!

you're the muse that sets everything off! *g*

*blush* i went back from my promise not to do angst...

will try harder to write fun things.... *g* am watching Police Academy... I forgot how fun the show is....

:) thank you, thank you!

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serenity151979 August 21 2005, 22:00:26 UTC
Hee, I've never been a muse before! And you do angst so well, I always eagerly anticipate your angst! Never stop writing it! But fun stuff is great too! =b

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pitza August 21 2005, 22:09:09 UTC
*g* I look forward to reading your smut too! your fic seemed to trigger certain ... uh... thoughts... *g* nice thoughts :)

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fred_bear August 22 2005, 03:09:17 UTC
Oh fuck.

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pitza August 22 2005, 10:59:41 UTC
*digi-hug* um... is that a good thing?

*wails* i'll try not to be downtrodden next time. but it's raining, and miserable, and... jessica&britney&mcfly *wails*

thanks for reading!

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fred_bear August 22 2005, 11:20:56 UTC
Yeah, it's a good thing :) It was raining here too this morning and I read this just after my car died and it cost me $360 to fix.

And yeah, I can see how you'd need to angst in response to the cotton-candy pop. Erg. Did you find some SD online?

*hug* back!

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pitza August 22 2005, 11:31:05 UTC
$360 whoa. cars nowadays. I use to remember owning a car (older than the hills of wales) that has easy mechanics. Easy like... I don't know cars, but i know what to do with it if it breaks down. Cars used to be so simple. *sigh* Now... I won't be surprised if there's some hidden powers that I don't know about. or a car with the capacity to... oh I don't know. build a house?

And I'm still yet to be able to out-con the insurance conmen.

SD! yep. Apparently my next door neighbour is an SD-fan (was walking home from greengrocers this morning and heard glorious SD). She's burning some choice materials onto CD that I can take with me to college tomorrow. *rubs hands* hmmm..

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michigangirl30 August 22 2005, 18:37:24 UTC
Oh ouch. God damn. Was that a little hope in the end? Please. That hurts so much, oh damn.

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pitza August 22 2005, 21:49:07 UTC
Yep. There's hope in the end. The way the ozone cleared after a huge storm. *cringe* I try not to hurt them (and everyone else) so much from now on.

*chatters to self* must try and keep depression to oneself

*g*

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michigangirl30 August 23 2005, 12:04:46 UTC
It's ok, really! I don't mind the owwies, it was just my way of expressing how it felt to read it. It was good, just very, very sad.

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pitza August 23 2005, 12:26:40 UTC
*g* thank you! I hope with the new ngchallenge, we'll have domestic bliss to tide owwies over... there's too many scabs already *g* sooo.. when am i going to read your glorious fix.. fics...

(you know now that i'm in withdrawal)... need fix. fic. you know what i mean... :)

thanks again!

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