Comments | pitza: the start of a journey

pitza

the start of a journey

Sep 20, 2005 11:48

Title: As it Became Dusk (Prologue/?)
Pairing: Greg/Nick
Rating: R/NC-17? (for disturbing themes)
Summary: There are two of them on this journey. It might be easier if they're actually living in the same State.
Warnings/Dislaimers/Spoilers: Futurefic. Warning for themes of disability, accidents, and violence.

( Greg stalks around the crimescene. Not that he wants to )

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realm_of_red September 20 2005, 12:25:40 UTC

I'm so glad you decided to continue this story. Wow! I'm really getting into this one. But don't make Nick go away---poor Greggo! I can't wait to read the next installment. You are a really good writer-----you draw me into your story and it takes a few moments for me to come back to reality when I'm done reading. Bravo!!!!!

pitza September 20 2005, 17:56:06 UTC

Heee.. well, he is going away. But thanks to technology, they're only a phonecall or an internet thingy away... *g*

thank you for your kind words! *is flattered*

serenity151979 September 20 2005, 13:19:03 UTC

Eeeeep! This story is really interesting, I'm so glad you continued it because I really want to know whats going to happen! I could really feel what was happening, you write so well.

pitza September 20 2005, 17:57:06 UTC

*g* thank you! it's going to be a ride, I suppose, but nothing too wild. It'll be quite tame...

Greg is going to meet the in-laws... hmmm

kimmychu September 20 2005, 13:38:58 UTC

Ooo, angsty!Greg! I don't see that often on the show ('cos Nicky holds the crown for that particular title!).

Looking forward to seeing what happens ... Greg VS The Stokes?

pitza September 20 2005, 17:58:07 UTC

*g* it's angst, but it ain't going to be tooooo wild or anything. the boys will be... well.. and obviously there's going to be the two sides of the in-laws. Greg's and Nick's both... hmmm... still don't know what to do with it though.

But, it'll be a ride. Almost... *g*

shacky20 September 20 2005, 16:19:18 UTC

Oh, how sad, but you know me, always up for some angst, yeah, glad to see you go on with this also, looking forward to more.

pitza September 20 2005, 17:59:34 UTC

*g* I'm approaching this with kidgloves, 'coz I wanted to make it not too angsty.. *g* and there'll be some complications along the way, which will be complicated I think, but I'm drafting all the people to help... *g* well, with much blackmail, and watching all those documentaries on telly... *g*

thank you for your kind words! it means a lot... *g*

byrons_brain September 20 2005, 17:21:33 UTC

awwwwwwwwww, poor greggie.... good story, very sad...

pitza September 20 2005, 18:00:19 UTC

*pats greggo* it's going to be a ride for him... but there'll be people around to help.. *g*

how are you, btw?

byrons_brain September 20 2005, 19:46:58 UTC

I'm good sweetpea... how are you doing after your visit to the hospital?

Resting up I hope....

pitza September 20 2005, 21:08:53 UTC

OMG! I like the prescription! *g* *Icon love*

Oh! Good to hear you're doing fine. Hope England's treating you well... *g* How's the parents and holiday stories an' all? *g*

Hmmm... am going back to work tomorrow.. *g* A colleague offers to be my driver until I recover. *sweet of 'im* Makes me want to not recover. Well, a tad bit.

sad he's married though.

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