Forays, revisited

[pitza]

Title: Maybe, baby (3/?)
Rating: PG-13ish?
Pairing: Nick/Greg (CSI)
Warnings/Spoilers: Hmm... Grave Danger inspired angst. Was part of the ngchallenge's Clothing Challenge. Previous two chapters can be found here.
Summary: Nick weighs his options and goes on a trip down memory lane.

Note: This continues the angsty theme, of which the blame I lay fully on the

Comments

[serenity151979]

*gulps* so so painfully pretty. I loved how Nick was remembering the good times, rather live in those moments than open his eyes and face the here and now.

And you can trust me that I'll be a real sea one day," Greg said as he lifted his head to look into Nick's eyes, "And you'll be the shore I'll always return to. Just.... wow. Such beautiful imagery. And Greg will always be there, won't he?

Sorry about the angstathon we seem to be on! Will have to write something lovely and fluffy next!

[pitza]

Will have to write something lovely and fluffy next

Forget lovely and fluffy I say... Let's get straight on to the smut!

Well, Greg'll be there. Like an itch that won't go away. That's why we need smut.

*grin*

[serenity151979]

Smut is also a very good way to go down. No pun intended!

[pitza]

Ooooh. 'intend' away! All roads are paved with good intentions. All healthy relationships are paved with good smut.

's definitely the way to go down.

[fred_bear]

*exhales slowly* I'm not going to be very coherent I'm afraid. I have to echo Serenity, beautiful imagery, I could almost hear the waves as Greg was talking on the beach.

You're braking my heart here though. :`(

[pitza]

You're braking my heart here though. :`(

I just hope that the boys'll talk (hopefully quickly resolving whatever needs to be resolved) and jump straight into the make-up sex, which is sorely needed. By the boys and by us.

*grin*

[starry_midnight]

*sniffles pitifully*

I just read the first parts, and then this and it's all so completely beautiful and heartbreaking and so good .

I can't wait for more. :)

[pitza]

thank you for the kind comments.

hopefully the next parts won't be so angsty. they're so emotionally draining to write...

but we'll see what the boys decide...

thanks again!

[csiwildchild]

Pitza...you make my life. not my day. my life. This has to be one of the best stories I've read by you. I loved how Greg compared himself to the sea. I might also add that I thought it was quite humorous: "The rate I'm going, it's easier to get a rock to talk than getting you to fucking wake up and smell the damn antiseptic." and "ask rockface over there.". Those made me giggle.

[pitza]

*grin* thank you! glad you liked it, and glad i contributed something to your day. life. er.. day and life.

I like the sea, and I remembered that one time (fifteen minutes?) when I was driven past a beach in California somewhere (can't even remember. it was eons ago!), and it's just amazing. I mean, nothing against British coastlines (some of 'em are aweinspiring too, when it's not raining), but there was something about that particular strip of heaven.

Anyway... I will stop mumbling about beaches now.. *grin*