Birds Against Pink Skies (Het, R)

Nov 18, 2007 16:23

Title: Birds Against Pink Skies
Rating: R
Category: Pre-series AU oneshot
Word Count: 7138
Characters: Sam/Jo, Ellen, mentions of John and Dean
Spoilers: None
Summary: California was going to be a chance at something new. She’s new but not part of his plan.
Warnings: None
Author’s Notes: An endless amount of gratitude to vinylroad for the beta and for being ( Read more... )

supernatural, oneshots, het, fanfiction

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Comments 26

azephirin November 18 2007, 21:59:49 UTC
I wasn't sure I'd buy this pairing, but I did, completely-this is really nice. I like the glimpse at Sam with someone he feels he can be honest with.

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pixel_0 November 22 2007, 20:00:27 UTC
This pairing's a tough sell, and I've only seen a few writers pull it off. I'm so glad to know that it worked for you.

Thank you very much. :)

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super_six_one November 18 2007, 22:15:08 UTC
Words cannot express how much I love this. ♥

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pixel_0 November 22 2007, 20:00:58 UTC
Thank you so very much. :)

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quiet_rebel November 18 2007, 23:30:19 UTC
What a nice AU story. I love how you made Jo fit into Sam's Stanford days. It was believeable and almost magicial on how they fit together.

That little twist with Jess was a nice one. Kind of like those "in another life" moments.

It'd be interesting to see what would happen if Sam ever saw John and Dean again in this world or if the YED would come after Jo like he did with Jess. Lots of possiblities...hint, hint... ;)

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pixel_0 November 22 2007, 20:02:01 UTC
I'm glad you liked the twist with Jess at the end. It was a part I went back and forth on for a long time, so it's good to know it worked. :)

Thank you very much!

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pixel_0 November 22 2007, 20:03:12 UTC
Jo's a hard character. I didn't really start liking her myself until after reading some fanfic where I felt like her character finally came through for me.

Thank you so much. :)

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laceandgrace November 18 2007, 23:48:30 UTC
This is excellent. ♥ There's something about it that rang real when I read it. Marvelous, and you're an amazing writer.

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pixel_0 November 22 2007, 20:03:39 UTC
*flattered* Thank you very much! :)

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