Los Apartamentos Blancos : Ch 0

[pixellifeblues]

This is my very very first attempt at making a sims 2 story. You can tell that my screenshots are a bit bad at the start, but I believe I've improved a little halfway into this chapter

Comments

[yavanna_june]

Hey I think you are doing fine with your English. I only noticed two spelling errors and that is something that Americans can't even claim LOL. If it helps www.dictionary.com will help you with words you aren't sure about. :-)

[yavanna_june]

Err *most Americans

See I even missed a whole word LOL

[na_chyan]

Ohh Thank you XD *hugs* I'm really glad it read well, I really am ;_;

[sim_montage]

Great start! I'm liking Beth already. She reminds me of me except for the workacholic part!

The two new boys are certainly bishounen! I can't wait to see what mischief they get up to.

Apparently the friend wasn't answering as their status suddenly turned to 'away'. So she probably wasn't at her keyboard... or was she?

I'm so glad I'm not the only one who wonders about that!!

The Apartment is gorgeous! You have some great building skills! I'm in the process of building an apartment myself at the moment, in between unreasonable bursts of anger whilst kicking the computer and tormenting the sims :-)

[na_chyan]

XDDDDDD I am SO glad you liked it!! I'm still kinda stuck lol. I'll play after tomorrow again & see what I can come up with D:

Abut msn.. GAH I hate that it always happens to me ;____;

Yeah I'm pretty proud of it xD I don't build many lots cause I'm lazy! But all apartment building online were too big for my PC to handle, so I made one myself :D

[piratesarrrlove]

Great story so far! :)

[na_chyan]

♥ Thank you!

[sim_fi]

I like the story thus far. Nice eye candy with the boys. The last show of Josef is nice!

[sim_fi]

Meant last "shot" of Josef is nice. :)

[na_chyan]

Thank you! he's my fav sim ever xD; I'm thinking of joining contests with him @_@

[podridalegacy]

Ooh. I'm liking this a lot so far. Beth is so pretty.

[na_chyan]

Thanks XD She'd look prettier with proper hair and makeup xD But for some reason, I love her without :3