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May 17, 2006 11:48

As Certain Dark Things Are To Be Loved (HP; R/S; 2,322 words; PG-13 for Very Bad Language and implications that mansex at one point occured.)

( You feel as if you’ve stumbled in on a strange couple kissing goodbye, so weirdly intimate is the revelation that Sirius kept something of his brother. )

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pixiefiction May 17 2006, 16:23:48 UTC

Heh, I know, I know. But I tried writing in third, and it felt stilted, so then I switched to first, but it felt TOO melodramatic (not that it's not melodramatic now...^^') and so I wrote the first sentence in second and it just flowed. But I know, normally I would want to kill me. XD

minnow_53 May 17 2006, 20:08:11 UTC

Wow, that really works, and it's very, very good.

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pixiefiction May 17 2006, 20:12:37 UTC

Merci beaucoup!

jackielupin May 17 2006, 20:40:05 UTC

I don't have a default icon that represents tissues or depression or any sort of sadness. But I'm crying because what you've got here is wonderful. Just - a wonderful story. I'm crying, but that's good. Means you got through to me. ;] Hard to do. I loved it. Heart shattering, and chest aching but lovely.

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pixiefiction May 17 2006, 20:43:48 UTC

Thank you so much for this comment. It might be a little sick that the fact that the story made someone cry makes my day, but there it is. I'm so very honored that it touched you. <3

magnetic_pole May 17 2006, 22:53:10 UTC

Oh, very lovely! I enjoyed the whole story, though what does it say about me that I liked the Selfish Remus of the first few paragraphs a little more than the Tragic Remus at the end? (smile) Well done. Maggie

pixiefiction May 17 2006, 22:55:08 UTC

Haha...me too, but then Remus is my favorite and I'm in total agreement with the little bout of selfishness XD

Thanks!

glass_icarus May 17 2006, 22:59:53 UTC

AAHH. all i have to say is: LOVE. (and HOMG i was reading that sonnet just yesterday! :D :D &hearts )

pixiefiction May 17 2006, 23:01:58 UTC

EEEE YAY FOR READING NERUDA *cough*
Neruda makes me happy in my squishy places.
Er. Like my heart, I mean. Really.

Anyway, glad you liked it! <3