is it silly of me wanting now to run around in dark dark rain with laughter in my eyes and mouth and accompanied by the dearest person i've ever had?
this makes me want to do that. just that. and yes, it's always nice to do something like that, but now i just feel like it'd be something special, something extra.
such a wonderful, wonderful story which i cannot get enough of. such eloquence, and the whole imagery throughout the fic, compelled forward by things like half-dreaming bone & when they kiss it gets into their lungs ... stunning. utterly. and the last line? utter, complete love. oh, yes.
ooo.... I can't really add anything to what others have already said, but this was so moving. I loved it!
I enjoyed it from beginning to end. One line just hit me- the part about how they can't save small miracles for later- and now I'm happy and sad at the same time. Brilliant!
A wonderfully poetic piece. You created a clear, strong image, and a beautiful one. Breaking the paragraphs you shift the meaning in an essential and intriguing way; I liked it a lot.
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this makes me want to do that. just that. and yes, it's always nice to do something like that, but now i just feel like it'd be something special, something extra.
such a wonderful, wonderful story which i cannot get enough of. such eloquence, and the whole imagery throughout the fic, compelled forward by things like half-dreaming bone & when they kiss it gets into their lungs ... stunning. utterly.
and the last line? utter, complete love. oh, yes.
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I enjoyed it from beginning to end. One line just hit me- the part about how they can't save small miracles for later- and now I'm happy and sad at the same time. Brilliant!
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It is- really moving. Thank you for sharing it.
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