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Submissions post for Summer Break battle

May 24, 2011 20:45

It's Summer Break, Go Write Stuff Fic and Art Submissions Post

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fic post, it's summer break go write stuff

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Percy/Annabeth: All Grown Up (G) anonymous May 28 2011, 03:25:26 UTC

“Percy, did you get the water bill paid?” Annabeth blew her bangs out of her eyes for the hundredth time as she chased a screaming toddler around the dining room table.

Percy froze, his hand midway between a bowl of strained apricots and his infant son’s waiting mouth. He knew he had to choose his next words carefully. He remembered Annabeth asking him to pay the bill two or three days ago, and he’d meant to, but he got held up at work that day and by the time they finally let him off the post office had been closed...

“Um, no. No I did not.”

“Percy! That was due two days ago!”

Ah, so it was two days ago.

“I’m sorry, Annabeth! I forgot!”

“You can’t just forget to pay the bills, Percy! Now we’re going to get a fine and the electric bill is due tomorrow, and so help me if there’s not going to be enough in the bank account now ( ... )

Re: Percy/Annabeth: All Grown Up (G) dmitchell1985 May 28 2011, 05:08:14 UTC

Not the prompter, but I loved this! :)

Re: Percy/Annabeth: All Grown Up (G) aimmyarrowshigh May 28 2011, 06:33:27 UTC

Very cute!

Re: Percy/Annabeth: All Grown Up (G) ladyeni May 29 2011, 19:24:45 UTC

Prompter here, I loved it!
It's really nice to see them in their future daily lives, and I can totally see Percy forgetting about stuff like bills and deadlines and whatnot.
Hope you write more soon!
BTW, I don't know what happened in the part you had to cut, but I think it's quite fine he way it is :)

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