More 00 fic...*facepalms*

Feb 22, 2008 09:04



Characters: Tieria, Sumeragi, OC, Allelujah
Rating: PG
Genre: T-chan Angst/ Sap
Warning: Not the least fluffy.
Spoilers : Episode 19
Sypnosis: Tieria is prepared to face the consequences of disobeying Veda, and remembers his past.... (Very Tieria centric)

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carameltrap February 22 2008, 02:31:24 UTC
Awww, Tieria... *wibbles*

I like it. You even included the bits on Setsuna and Allelujah. Sumeragi as a former Observer is quite interesting and a good twist here, considering she's a tactical forecaster.

Tieria is not my favourite but I love your description of him here and it makes me like him a little more. Doesn't help that he went and smile in that last episode. Really lovely fic. Well done.

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pkyyr February 22 2008, 09:14:19 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it. Tieria and Allelujah are my top two favourites, but I love them all!

...Oh and T-chan's smile! It was so innocent and uncertain.... like he doesn't really know how to use it.....

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pigtail78 February 22 2008, 08:48:47 UTC
Firstly, Happy Birthday! ^_^ Got wind of it from your sis's blog. *throws confetti* Hope it'll be an awesome birthday for you!

Very nice take on Tieria possible past, though it is rather sad how tortured it is. :( I like the idea of him continuing from a "selected" family line chosen to be a Gundam Meister.

It's slightly different from deadspeaker's idea that he's a bio-engineered chimera...but your theory about him being human, but trained into an obedient "robot" and having the chip implanted in his head sounds very plausible too. I like it a lot. :3 ( ... )

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pkyyr February 22 2008, 09:12:19 UTC
LOL thank you! I've had a great day so far (a wake up call with birthday donuts from my hostel mates, even! XD)...Oh, and T-chan and Alle-kun in kimonos of course XD

Well, T-chan must have some really traumatic past! Since he's bitcher (and more miserable) than any of the Meisters,(I'm averaging Hallelujah and Allelujah out here XD) and the Meisters all had tortured childhoods.

Glad you like my insane theories about T-chan's past!

COOKIE awarded!! o(^_^)o In my timeline, the rescue was 10 years ago; Allelujah was 9 and Setsuna, 6. Which would make Tieria about 20 now, Allelujah is 19 (going on 20), Setsuna, 16. I was really wondering about the Gundam that Setsuna saw... I mean, if no one knew what Celestial Being was when Exia first appeared, how did they account for the Kurdish-war-Gundam that appeared? So I wrote it in. ^^

Heh, yes. I like Sumeragi. She's so....tortured; you know her in one sense and yet she's almost as much of a mystery as Tieria. And it seems she's quite well connected......

Poor Tieria, his sudden breakdown ( ... )

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pigtail78 February 22 2008, 14:12:03 UTC
Ah, icic...the timeline makes sense now. ^__^ Yup, Tieria should be a wee bit older than Allelujah (20 or 21), cause Sumeragi had no qualms inviting him to join her for a drink in one of the earlier episodes. XD

Yupyup, Allelujah x Tieria is so much love *hearts;! :3 They haven't had much interaction together in the past few episodes, sadly...but hope there will be soon. ^_^

Can I friend you? ^_^ I like reading your fics and it's always nice to meet another AlleTier fan. :3

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pkyyr February 22 2008, 15:18:22 UTC
Sure! It's not like my friendslist is exclusive...:P I'll add you too! XD

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fyretoppaaa February 26 2008, 08:56:12 UTC
And because the information is just revealed like that, snap, something which should have the emotional equivalent of a fist to the solar plexus is weakened to a "Oh gosh, really? How interesting." moment.

What I noticed, sticking with the happenings in the story itself, was the lack of kneejerk reaction: denial, as is usually present in such cases--and I'll second the fact that the presentation of the information itself, while well-done, can be improved. :DD So, uh, basically agreeing here. >>; *useless*

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pkyyr February 26 2008, 11:45:19 UTC
............Well you're both actually right. *facepalms* I had planned to write more, but I knew my writing stamina wouldn't last....And if I didn't complete it, it'd join the huge pile of unfinished fanfics in my computer...so kena truncated *facepalms*

I FAIL XD

I think I'll edit it when my inspiration muse returns :P

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fyretoppaaa February 26 2008, 08:42:38 UTC
*flails to a corner to die slowly of glee*

O-Oh man. This is a fic I needed so very badly. Which makes no sense at all, but what I mean is that I've been looking for something like this, for Tieria, for a ridiculously long time. S-So satisfying. ♥♥♥ And I love your interpretation on whether he might or mightn't be an android. The way the whole thing was wrapped up was surpassingly lovely, a-and I want moar AlleTier fic from you. X3

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pkyyr February 26 2008, 11:47:55 UTC
Thank you!:) Glad to have satisfied your fanfic craving ;)

I would like to write more AlleTier too, only my muse has abandoned me and gone flitting off somewhere! XD I promise I'll write agan when she/he/it returns. LOL

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