Comments | pkyyr: ....Whee, more 00 fic!

pkyyr

....Whee, more 00 fic!

Feb 27, 2008 13:58

Characters: (H)Allelujah, Tieria, Mihael Trinity
Pairing:(H)Allelujah/Tieria :P
Genre: Humour, Slice of Life
Rating: PG
Warnings: Hints of shounen-ai. Very large hints. XD
Sypnosis: Mihael is annoying Allelujah. Allelujah ignores him (mostly). Then Mihael tries to hit on Tieria. Cue possesive Alle-kun!

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pkyyr February 27 2008, 10:08:50 UTC

It's Alle-kun's Birthday? XD

Halle IS more protective than Alle-- he's more possesive, see? XD XD

pigtail78 February 27 2008, 10:29:08 UTC

Are there more H/Allelujah x Tieria fics posted today? Where? *grabby hands* All I've seen so far is this one. XD

caelestin February 27 2008, 09:49:18 UTC

I love this to bits ♥. Allelujah has his protective air and Hallelujah has his threatening snarl. Even Tiara-chan could not complain against that sort of possessive attitude XD;.

Thanks for writing this ^^.

pkyyr February 27 2008, 10:10:25 UTC

I bet T-chan secretly likes it ahahahahhaha. ;)

I loved writing it! So no problem :P

carameltrap February 27 2008, 10:02:37 UTC

Eee, I like this. I'd say more but I'm too busy grinning at this fic. So, um, let's leave at how much I like it.

pkyyr February 27 2008, 10:11:28 UTC

Glad you liked it! :) And that it made you grin! :D

pigtail78 February 27 2008, 10:27:35 UTC

Hee...this fic is cute! :3 I really like your Hallelujah here *wants him to toss Mihael out of the nearest airlock too*

Really I like how both Allelujah and Hallelujah are equally possessive over Tieria. :3 But I feel his reaction to Mihael bothering Tieria was a bit hair-trigger and too abrupt. All Mihael did was wolf whistle and call him "pretty boy"...I mean, he hadn't even touched Tieria yet. ^_^;

If Mihael had groped Tieria or maybe tried to force a kiss (like his sister XD), that action would have been more compelling to push Allelujah over the edge. But then, Hallelujah would have to kill Mihael and things would get messy. XD

The "Tieria was theirs" line was simply delightful...it definitely helped conjure up smutty images of Tieria getting smexed by both of them *nosebleed*. Though it won't be possible physically, doujinshi artists obviously don't give a hoot, I bet. ^_~

pkyyr February 28 2008, 00:13:22 UTC

Well, he was already running on a short fuse thanks to Mihael's snarky comments. I mean, I tend to snap at people easily if there had been little annoyances before that, (even if the little annoyances came from other people.)

......And yeah well, don't want bits of Mihael to dirty the Ptolemaios, do we? Who'd clean up? :P

smutty images of Tieria getting smexed by both of them Now that is a doujin I want to read OWN XD

menelvir February 27 2008, 15:54:06 UTC

Wow this fic has got your style all over it!

I like it because it's got a nice balance of humour and serious stuff. The thought that tough old Hallelujah shares Alle's feelings towards Tieria is kinda sweet too. And that's coming from someone who does not usually go for slash.

By the way, the airlock comment reminded me of a game I used to play. There was this airlock on the spaceship, and once, for fun, I had my character walk out into space. XD

pkyyr February 28 2008, 00:18:42 UTC

Hmmm. I have a style?(!?!) Hahaha okay apparently I didn't notice :P

YOU WILL BE TURNED INTO A YAOI FANGIRL ONE DAY AHAHAHA!!!!! *ahem* If you don't usually go for slash, who exactly are you pairing up in the 00 verse? LOL... just curious cause the female characters (other than Nena) seem to have the personality of cardboard cutouts. XD

.....And wait. You SPACED your character? Seriously? ....You are definately related to my family LOL. I was a fan of this show Babylon 5 and they spaced a teddy bear (EVIL!!) XD XD