Comments | placidmage: Fic - Spanner/Shoichi "A King of Infinite Space"

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Fic - Spanner/Shoichi "A King of Infinite Space"

Jan 07, 2010 22:47

Title: "A King of Infinite Space" *
Author/Artist: placidmage
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst; Extended metaphors? ^^;
Prompt: Spanner/Irie - Reunion "Do you sleep anymore?"
Word count: 672

With this one, I really struggled. I don't even like extended metaphors. ^^; That'll teach me next time for choosing angsty plots.

( The King of Infinite Space )

fic, reborn

Comments 6

theprerogative January 8 2010, 07:35:48 UTC

I enjoyed this. The words flow so well it makes me jealous.

placidmage January 9 2010, 00:50:32 UTC

Hey, thanks for reading again! ~<3 I'm happy to hear you liked it, I'm still not sure I do. ^^; But practice makes perfect, and I guess that's what fic fests are for. ^^; And it was fun, too!

dame_batsie January 10 2010, 19:22:12 UTC

I actually liked your extended metaphors. They were very relevant and worked, for lack of a better description. LOL. Very nice job. :)

placidmage January 11 2010, 02:29:30 UTC

yaay, thanks! I usually don't write things like this, so I'm glad it worked out okay. *phew*

shinibadtzmaru8 January 23 2010, 01:59:18 UTC

this was a nice, thought provoking read. I liked it a lot. Your use of dreams, fantasy, reality and internal dialogue made the peice very poetic and wistful. Keep it up!

placidmage January 23 2010, 06:21:35 UTC

Whoa! You read my fic?! 8D Thank you! I heard from emmayori that you were watching Reborn, and I'm totally psyched about cosplaying it with everyone.

(love your icon, btw!)

(oh! And I haven't forgotten about that picture...... @_@ Actually, that's a lie. I forgot. But you just reminded me! So I will do it. @_@ I completely fail. If you cosplay Colonello, you have full permission to terrorize my Tsuna. I deserve it for taking this long.)