almost beats seeing all the groups of kids in the mall in the food court but not quite

[plainwhitewalls]

While I was in the customer service line at publix this woman kept edging her way into the line, in front of me, like she was going to cut me. she smelled like cigarette smoke and she had more wrinkles on her face then she shouldve for what I figured her age to be. she was really out of shape-the word frumpy comes to mind-and she had really dry

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[tornbetweenyou]

wow.. thats really, wow of u.. i can relate kinda though.. like i know what its like when those stupid ppl try to butt infront of u and think they can just b/c ur a young teenager.. but ive never had that particular case :-\ but its really honorable of u to wish that she could have gone ahead of u :) im proud of my little nikki

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[tornbetweenyou]

oh and when i say 'thats really, wow of u' its not bad thing.. i was saying that ur a good person.. not like 'wow ur a bitch' lol just to clarify

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[onelastime_s]

I like your observations. How you turn everyday experiences into observations to write something about. This is a sign of a good writer. In my creative writing class, my teacher made us carry a journal with us at all times, and write down things just like this. I like this.

[plainwhitewalls]

thank you

[fizzlelol104]

thats so sad. that makes me think like wow they were my age once and thought the same thing. they musta said "i wonder what im gona be wen i grow up?" i bet they never imagined that. also makes me think what a person like that COULD have become had she not made w.e. choices she did. sometimes i think its God's little reminder to make good decisions and not go down a path that leads to that kinda thing. it proves the point that life is a choice. "wen life gives u lemons, u make lemonade." pfft, sounds so easy.

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[lilmis_scareall]

when you see people like that you shouldnt have to force a smile because thats not what they want to see.. spread your wealth in a smile.. no fake b/s because people like her know when youre bullshitting. you feel motivated? cause i sure as hell would.. makes me wanna carry a camera.. think of all the different people just in coral springs alone.. lilo and stitch-a-fy it, instead of taking pics of random fat people go take pics of people you look at and u just have to know more about.. hell i promise you that it would make a pretty fucking amazing collage. ms. observant you are, ever a time you see things you never wanted to? You need a job.. as a waitress. i think youd do quite well.
-rina (or ari,ri,arianna,anna,arioula,arianita.. whichever you prefer)