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*screams silently* wingsofflight June 16 2013, 01:54:05 UTC
I'll be back to edit.
First comment \o/

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Re: *screams silently* planet_ac June 18 2013, 02:26:55 UTC
i guess school's out for the summer, huh?

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Re: *screams silently* wingsofflight June 18 2013, 23:25:35 UTC
Actually no, I happen to be in the midst of exams.
But you came up with a new ongoing YulSic, so what was I to do other than gobble it up the moment I saw it.

That chemistry, I can just see it, between Yuri and Jessica. Damn. How old is Ms.Jessica here?
Go get it Yuri! But then the prologue seems quite angsty so...hm...

Sorry I have to leave a quite lacking comment (exams! T_T) but I just wanted to say I love the characters already with irritable!Jessica and charming!Yuri - the latter who seems to be just the right amount of original quirk to get under her unnie's skin. Yuri as a mechanic is an added bonus.
Love how the details flow and create flattering and suitable imagery to the story and I'm really (again, I know) into your fic so keep up the great work!

P.S. - YulSoo?

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Re: *screams silently* planet_ac June 20 2013, 00:43:24 UTC
Aww you poor thing. Never mind. It'll soon be over and you'll have the whole summer to chill. Fighting!

This fic...yes, had a lot of doubts whether to post or not. Doubts as to whether i'll be able to deliver coz if I write according to what I have in mind, then it's gonna be challenging. But I'll try my damnedest.

Jessica would be in her mid-20s. Just imagine...19 yr.old Yuri running after a much older Sica who's all like ugh will i be accused of cradle snatching?! Lol YulSoo? Ok, that's just really random, I admit! But the tea plantations, tree-lined country road are for real - I actually saw pictures of such a place in Korea. It stuck in my head and I just had to write them in. And yes. It'll escalate to angst at some point. Again, it'll probably be the hardest thing for me to write. Aish.

Anyway, thank you for taking precious time off from your studies to read and comment, Fall. Lol...for calling you that still. Nice "hearing" from you again <333

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plain_simple39 June 16 2013, 02:12:36 UTC
just one question Ac, do you work as a mechanic as your sideline? just joking!
looks like Yuri and Jessica started off on a wrong foot.
so is that "kid" going to sweep Jessica off her feet or the other way around?
and what is jessica doing in that town? escaping from personal problems?

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planet_ac June 17 2013, 03:09:07 UTC
gasp. how did you know i moonlight as a mechanic?!? naah. i have just that teeny bit of interest in cars, is all.

at this point, i would say kidYuri is "curious" while Jessi is sorta like ugh, dumb kid.

why's jessi in that town & is she escaping from personal problems? well, get ready for another character to come in, possibly next part.

thanks for reading :)

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anonymous June 16 2013, 07:09:07 UTC
Fyeah new fic! What a good week for some of us what with JTSJ and now this! Don't really have any constructive comments, just wanted to let you know someone's reading ;)

By the way, what's the reason behind naming the place yulsoo?

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planet_ac June 17 2013, 03:28:07 UTC
lol, i think i was cheering legit at 2 something in the morning when i checked my email and saw JTSJ's pm.

well, the rationale for conjuring up a fictitious town is so that i won't have to bother with authenticity issues. i needed a name and this is so random... i just put part of Jessica's Korean name with Yuri's and got YulSoo.

thank you for reading :)

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shyluv87 June 16 2013, 07:11:44 UTC
Oh....i will love it.
Cold Sica and friendly Yuri...
Love in Yulsoo, kekekekke...

I'm anticipating part 2

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planet_ac June 17 2013, 03:29:37 UTC
thank you...thank you for your enthusiasm, Shy...kekekeke...

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checkinyourbra June 16 2013, 07:14:43 UTC
This is exciting! I like their dynamic already. Cold, grumpy Jessica is so attractive. :3 (I would have been SO embarrassed about the signboard thing. LOL)

Only cheerful, fresh-faced Yuri the mechanic can turn that 'tude around.

Lovin' it so far!

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planet_ac June 17 2013, 03:49:11 UTC
yeah...there's something about a cold, grumpy Jessica, isn't there? lol.

thanks for dropping in :)

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