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plasmaslinger

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Dec 07, 2005 21:59

if i was crying
on the phone, with my friend
it was for outcries,
it was for clenched jaws,
it was for freedom from myself and the trees magnificent.
oh, oblivious i was!
the searing joy, oh.

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Uhhhh... washing_machine December 8 2005, 03:18:21 UTC

"If I was crying
in the van, with my friend
it was for freedom
from myself and from the land
I made a lot of mistakes"

~Sufjan Stevens, "Chicago" from " Come on Feel the Illinoise!"

Awkward coincidence. (Or something else????)

Re: Uhhhh... _susurrous December 8 2005, 07:37:09 UTC

oh god oh god that concert was so good.

Re: Uhhhh... plasmaslinger December 9 2005, 00:58:08 UTC

it's essentially a response to it. so, in a sense, plagiarism. i do it sometimes because i never took the classes over poetic structure and i have to study it on my own.
so, it's- something else????