As for Tomomasa, I agree but he was coming off too 'dirty old man' instead of 'flirty bishi' and it was creeping me out...I couldn't figure how Takamichi would possibly deal with it! lol
Whenever I go into a fandom I make it a goal to do a fic for each basic pairing. Right now I've got a Tomo/Taka one in the works and then I'll do Inori/Shimon and Yori/Tenma. After that I'm sure I'll come up with more tho!
OMG you're right about that warning <3 I'm still giggling ^^ It will be wonderful if you write a sequel. Oh yeah. "...only Eisen brought forth these strange reactions within him..." *squeal* Somehow I think instead of a mouse we can use a cat, so there will be a scene where Yasuaki will lick Eisen's cheek to reassure him or...okay, look what your fic did to my imagination ( just like the time when I read btamamura-neechan's ficcies ) Oh, before I forget, thank you for writing a cute fic ^^ P.S : neechan, you're fast
I hadn't thought of writing a sequel but if the readers demand I suppose I can't ignore it! ^_~ I never thought of the cat but that would be great! Oooh! Now you've got me going again! lol Guess I'm back to writing then!
'Shoujo' wa Pastede on, YEY!sailorlight22March 14 2008, 16:34:46 UTC
Ah, you have NO IDEA how happy I am to see this ^_^ This pairing is one of the few that I'd consider OTP-material (obviously lol) And you've done a great job of showing how a pre-relationship scenario between these two would be, thanks so much for sharing it with us! And I second the question as to Tomomasa's perversion being anything but WIN. Hee, I hope to see more Haruka fics from you in the near future, maybe I'll even manage to (gasp/worldends) update my own crapfic sometime before I hit 30 XD
Re: 'Shoujo' wa Pastede on, YEY!platinummagicMarch 15 2008, 00:58:31 UTC
I'm really happy you liked it! Yasuaki/Eisen just seems so right I couldn't resist. It seems that my first fics are all gonna be pre-relationship stories, whether I mean to or not. Well, whatever my muse demands! >_<
Plus, you have to update your fic! I've been printing each chapter out so I can read them between classes! Your helping me keep my sanity - or what little I have left anyway! ^_^
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Yasuaki and Eisen were a pairing I could see in canon, but this is the closest I've seen fic come to that dynamic of quietly confused interest.
(and from your intro notes on the comm - how is Tomomasa being a perv a *bad* thing? ^.^ )
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As for Tomomasa, I agree but he was coming off too 'dirty old man' instead of 'flirty bishi' and it was creeping me out...I couldn't figure how Takamichi would possibly deal with it! lol
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This one really is very lovely...are you planning on more fics?
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Whenever I go into a fandom I make it a goal to do a fic for each basic pairing. Right now I've got a Tomo/Taka one in the works and then I'll do Inori/Shimon and Yori/Tenma. After that I'm sure I'll come up with more tho!
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"...only Eisen brought forth these strange reactions within him..." *squeal*
Somehow I think instead of a mouse we can use a cat, so there will be a scene where Yasuaki will lick Eisen's cheek to reassure him or...okay, look what your fic did to my imagination ( just like the time when I read btamamura-neechan's ficcies )
Oh, before I forget, thank you for writing a cute fic ^^
P.S : neechan, you're fast
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I hadn't thought of writing a sequel but if the readers demand I suppose I can't ignore it! ^_~ I never thought of the cat but that would be great! Oooh! Now you've got me going again! lol Guess I'm back to writing then!
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P.S- Your icon is *squee*! ^_^
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Plus, you have to update your fic! I've been printing each chapter out so I can read them between classes! Your helping me keep my sanity - or what little I have left anyway! ^_^
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