23。jigsaw falls into place

Mar 29, 2011 00:21

jigsaw falls into place
Seungho/Joon (w/ mentions of Byunghee/Joon and Rain/Joon)
R ; 2612 w.
warning: contains angst and dark themes.
a/n: this ended up a darker than i expected it to be. also, i have nothing against rain and byunghee (who i've portrayed as such an imbecile here :/ i'm apologizing as early as now, i'm sorry ). came from a request ( Read more... )

pairing: joon/seungho, fandom: mblaq

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elvenknight16 March 28 2011, 17:55:43 UTC
This is so dark!
I love it~

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playrepeat March 30 2011, 03:28:51 UTC
♥ thank you so much! :)

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countrymir March 28 2011, 21:13:38 UTC
THIS FIC IS STUNNING.omfg ( ... )

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playrepeat March 30 2011, 04:23:00 UTC
oh god such a lovely wonderful comment thank you so so much, really means a lot to me ;_; ♥

i'm extremely glad you liked it! and that you didn't find the angst disgustingly angsty or something lol, thank you so so much :) ♥

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weerainbow March 28 2011, 23:16:28 UTC
Oh wow, I don't normally really enjoy too much angsty stuff but this was pretty amazing. The atmosphere you created was truly electric!! And you got me so drawn into their situation, I was holding my breath reading half of it. I love how you brought the emotions so deep, how it started off seeming like a harmless game and a Byunghee being a bit of a jerk but by the end it seemed that all three of them were lost and broken hearted and lonely. And I feel like maybe even though the truth was so hurtful it had to come out and maybe they can start to build things between them again from scratch...I hope they can.

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playrepeat March 30 2011, 04:26:24 UTC
ahh i'm glad you gave this a try despite the fic being extremely angsty and i'm really glad you liked it!! ♥ thank you so much :)

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dreamofrevelry March 29 2011, 02:13:23 UTC
Wow, this was extremely good and angsty! <333
I was drawn in the whole time and I didn't think it would end so sadly but this has room for a second part...? :3
Thanks for sharing this!! :D

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playrepeat March 30 2011, 04:34:28 UTC
thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it! :) ♥ i don't think i'll continue this but i'll definitely be writing more seunghojoon / joonseungho in the future :)

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dreamofrevelry March 30 2011, 21:26:57 UTC
:O YAAAY! Okay, I'll definitely look forward to more of your writing~
*^* <3

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fxckinmyway March 29 2011, 11:25:42 UTC
OMG YOU WROTE IT YOU WROTE IT YOU WROTE IT ACKKK I LOVE YOU AND HOW I'VE MISSED YOU'RE WRITING THIS WAS GORGEOUS PERFECT BEAUTIFUL ETCi can't believe you actually wrote it, you're the best!!! i didn't expect that you'd fulfill my request i love you you're amazing. ♥ AND GOD I LOVE IT IT'S PERFECT ANGSTY GOODNESS AND YES I'M VERY MUCH SATISFIED but now i want more because it's just that good. joon and seungho are perfect here, i adore their chemistry and i love it that seungho cares so much about joon despite joon cheating on him again and joon you precious thing ackkkk so good. AND I FREAKING LOVE BYUNGHEE HERE, is that wrong? ._. yes he is pretty much a douche here but i know how some people are when they're drunk, i know some friends who act this way when they're drunk and to me, it's very realistic so yeah, this was really good. i'm sorry for being such a mess here trying to say how much i love this. THEIR CONVERSATION UGHHHHH i seriously live for these kinds of conversations, it just flowed so smoothly and i could really feel ( ... )

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playrepeat March 31 2011, 10:45:07 UTC
oh god you are so sweet asdsafdjkl;dfaf thank you ;_;

GAH what a wonderful beautiful comment, thank you so so much. ♥ i'm so glad that you liked it! i was so unsure of myself if i could pull off something as raw and angsty as this, i've never really written anything like this, with so much angst and dialogue and complications with their situation so i'm really really happy that you found this okay!! :D you made my day haha. and thanks too for requesting that prompt. made me explore different things in writing and i'm just really flattered that this fic of mine satisfied what you requested. :)

i've seen that joonho gif countless times, but seeing it again (+ your wonderful wonderful comment!) made me smile like this...


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fxckinmyway April 1 2011, 16:51:20 UTC
aw, joon!


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