Heresy - Oneshot

[plenty8]

Title: Heresy

Chapters: Oneshot
Pairings: Sehun/Luhan, Kai/Luhan
Rating: NC-17
Genre: dunno.. i’m just gonna say smut. I don’t know whether this is smut or romance tbh. oh, and AU.
Warnings: in which Sehun and Luhan are brothers. yes, brothers. also dub-con.
Summary: Sehun is trying hard to control his urges around his brother, but a few minor

Comments

[dalpaengi]

i read this on AFF but am glad to have the opportunity to throw my thoughts at you on lj.

haha you have this way of seamlessly weaving words and ideas together that just works

you don't resort to using highfalutin language or any of that bullshit. all of your stories have a gritty and brazen atmosphere to them too. cool

The way you dive into dark themes....unf.
I'm not gonna compare you to any of the other hunhan or lukai authors specifically but I'll just say...I like it when you go places other writers are either too scared to touch or lack the skills to execute well.

I love your characterization of Sehun in this one; love the sharp, slightly obnoxious and rough tone of his thoughts (gawd he's such a bad little boy lol)...it reflects the dirty reality of how complicated and taboo his sexual attraction is. you have such a strong writing personality
ur smut is perfection asasadsss poor bb lulu as always.
lol I'm done...

[plenty8]

oh man you almost made me cry ;_______;

this is by far the most beautiful comment i've ever received. thank you. and for someone to say i have a strong writing personality.. wow it's like a dream come true ;A;

i am seriously gonna treasure this forever.

and i hope that in the future other authors will go scary places too ;)

<3

abnidfkjnskhml ily

[lilmikan101]

Is it bad that I actually enjoyed reading this till the end? Like how Sehun was so needy for Luhan and he fucking hates Kai so much he would want to just kill him and let Luhan be his? And then Luhan didn't oblige afterwards while they were having sex and oh my god everything is perfect.

God I have no shame.... oTL...
/i demand a sequel or smh/

[plenty8]

it's totally not weird that you like this my friend /pats back

and thank you :D

maybe some day a sequel will float about~

[98_10_15]

what did i just read. holy crap.

[plenty8]

yeah i know
surry lol

[hiddenmeghanis]

...but no matter what would happen, Sehun had won. Because the end, Luhan was his, and they all knew it. One way or another.
that was a great way to close this. i really enjoyed it! all that tension, mmmmhm.
thank you for sharing!

[plenty8]

thank you for reading! <3

[mainth]

That was sick omfg @@ sehun you slut @@

[plenty8]

xD