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If You Can't Stand the Heat XIII

Jul 12, 2005 14:07

Title: If You Can't Stand the Heat
Part(s): 13/?
Pairings: Monaboyd
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: AU
Disclaimers: I don't know them and I'm not affiliated with them.
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Author's Note Thank you to all, for the tweaks ( Read more... )

Comments 9

thumbaleena July 12 2005, 23:24:18 UTC

I explained this to you on IM honey but I'll say it here too.

The way you list descriptive words is something I really like.

Touching. Tasting. Lapping.

3 words say so much and you don't need anymore as it lets our minds do the rest!

Yey for writing smut!

plinkin July 15 2005, 02:45:55 UTC

The smut is so hard for me. Thank you.

glass_moment July 19 2005, 00:16:36 UTC

*DEAD*

this is all.

plinkin July 30 2005, 05:14:53 UTC

So glad to have killed you. Have a nice day. Drive through.

puellaestella July 29 2005, 05:59:12 UTC

It's priceless, the look on his face, when I man-handle him backwards, down the hall and roughly into my bed. A bit off balance, Bills? That's OK, love; I'm here to catch you.

I love. All of this, but. I really love these lines.

plinkin July 30 2005, 05:15:32 UTC

Dom. He's so...I don't know, Dom. He's insecure and cheeky and pushy all at once. I love him.

stormatdusk July 30 2005, 04:07:12 UTC

Smut is HARD for you? Wow, you do it beautifully. Keep doing what you're doing, please?

Really, thank you for writing this series; it's just lovely!

plinkin July 30 2005, 05:16:37 UTC

Oh, thank you. I'm so terribly nervous about the smut. I'd rather just be silly and schmoopy. Writing the actual sex part makes me crazy.

And thank you for taking the time to read all of this. You're good for my writing ego, you know?

whimsicalmusing September 28 2005, 08:31:30 UTC

Loved.