The Soul-Drinker

Jun 12, 2009 09:46

Okay, so here's the first half of my Plot-without-porn. I haven't written the second half yet. I'm a bad girl. So be warned. But, like, I have it plotted out!

Title: The Soul Drinker
Fandom: Angel: The Series, season 5
PG-13
Summary: A rogue group of would-be do-gooders is out to steal Angel's soul. Somehow this turns into a Spike & Gunn buddy- ( Read more... )

f: buffyverse, c: gunn, c: spike, a: hello_spikey

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whichclothes June 12 2009, 20:19:02 UTC
Hee hee--looks like our Spikes have simultaneously lost their souls.

I'm enjoying the Spike/Gunn interplay. Can't wait to see what you do next. And I did love this line:

Spike shoved his hands in his pockets. “Bloody hell. I’ve got to get a publicist.”

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hello_spikey June 12 2009, 21:46:20 UTC
heee!

Poor Spikey. Go to all that trouble to get yourself a soul, and wanton harlots write you out of it again!!

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rebcake June 12 2009, 21:10:52 UTC
“I said ‘you win’. Bloody lawyers.”

Great sniping, all around! Boots to suits.

Another little typo: out of site s/b "sight".

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hello_spikey June 12 2009, 21:47:00 UTC
glad you like the sniping! yay snark!

And thanks for the typo catch. Woops! I am a menace to grammar!

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rahirah June 13 2009, 02:48:54 UTC
OMG I LOVE THIS LIKE BURNING!!!!!

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hello_spikey June 14 2009, 23:32:05 UTC
*squee*

:D Hope you like the second half. Or, um, third half, if it comes to that.

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lynnenne June 13 2009, 14:57:21 UTC
I love the Spike-Gunn dynamic here. Very enjoyable read.

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hello_spikey June 14 2009, 23:33:21 UTC
Thank you! I wanted the dynamic to be easy and believable. Now, of course, they will have an issue or two. I hope it resolves okay...

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louise39 June 13 2009, 15:39:38 UTC
Great start to this story. What will the soul stealers do now that they have Spike's soul?

Love the casual conversation between Spike and Gunn covering race, class and suits!

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hello_spikey June 14 2009, 23:34:31 UTC
Thank you! Yes, well, your question will be answered in the second part! I promise!

So glad you liked the conversation. I was a wee bit nervous about it!

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