as;ldjfkas;dlfj *_* oh, boys!! ;lajskfd the dreaming (Tezuka confessing love for Ryoma is a nice touch, btw XD) And bedsharing and sweet sleepy conversations!! oh, love. *_* I want to snuggle them both.
I like how you wrote Fuji's vulnerability; he doesn't show it outside, but it takes over his dreams... Tezuka declaring undying love to Ryoma and Yuuta. Oh, Fuji, your subconsious is a scary place. XD
And I absolutely *loved* the Fuji/Yuuta conversation at the end. Yuuta, you are so cute. And Fuji is just... well, Fuji. Major love. :D ♥♥♥
...why do have mixed feelings, this is awesome. :3
This was fantastic. Lucky spurious! It was so true to them, and just. Love.
"I did it because I love you, Yuuta," Aniki says softly into the dimming evening, and his brother's arms halt in their motions. "And I love you because you're my brother. You understand that, don't you?"
Utterly adorable. I love how it's vague and understated but so darn sweet, all that sibling/rivals/something-more tension and interaction. The dialogue is so smooth and lovely, too! Love it.
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I like how you wrote Fuji's vulnerability; he doesn't show it outside, but it takes over his dreams... Tezuka declaring undying love to Ryoma and Yuuta. Oh, Fuji, your subconsious is a scary place. XD
And I absolutely *loved* the Fuji/Yuuta conversation at the end. Yuuta, you are so cute. And Fuji is just... well, Fuji. Major love. :D ♥♥♥
...why do have mixed feelings, this is awesome. :3
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"I did it because I love you, Yuuta," Aniki says softly into the dimming evening, and his brother's arms halt in their motions. "And I love you because you're my brother. You understand that, don't you?"
Guh.
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