HHYL Fanfic.

[plouff]

Hi there!

So this is my very first fanfic ever.

With luxiufer having injured her neck, she might take time before updating her awesome fanfic.
And since we never really know when redturtle95 ever post, doesn't have an actual schedule

Comments

woh!!!!

[talker09]

You a novice I hardly believe it .it is really.gud my writing capabilities seems like a child of 10 years ,yours looks much cool and nice plus mature ...I absolutely love it..keep up the gud work

[plouff]

Aaw thank you for the compliments. I've been infatuated with HHYL for so long that it feels like I know them irl lol :p

also I love the English language a lot so I always watch movies in English and read books in English. helps me a lot!

but you came with this amazing idea to mix these two beautiful stories together! which is a first :D!!!

don't worry, the more you practice something, the faster you can master it ;)

Your ff is really good

[talker09]

Your ff is really good. Thank you very much. When will be the post next one?

Re: Your ff is really good

[plouff]

Thank you! I'm now busy finishing the last bits... It will probably be up tomorrow :)

first

[fira_bunny]

Auw.... Auw.... Auw..... ////o////
Lu chang soooooooo cuteeee.....XD
I never expected that lu cang still want to be seme.
Very refreshing ideas,
continue please...... (Puppy eyes)
i supported you......yay

P.s. Sorry for my bad english.

Re: first

[fira_bunny]

Nooooooo.....
Why.....
I'm not first......TToTT

Re: first

[plouff]

Better luck next time ;)

Well Lu Cang is still a man after all, he has needs. No let's not call them needs, I see it more like a phantasm. Because I'm pretty sure he's happy just the way things are, but a man can dream right ;p

I have something in mind for my next ff, but it's still a draft in my head now and I don't know when it will finally take a final form...

Anyway thank you for your support!!
Makes me happy :D!!

Re: first

[fira_bunny]

you're welcome.
i like your hhyl fanfic, that are sweet and.......... elegant (maybe...)
i;m waitingggggggggggg for your 2nd post.
so expect a long long long..... story of you.
(While yell is uncertain at the end of a cliff during hurricane wear raincoats...lol)

[ahemahem2]

its fun thank you for writing

[plouff]

and thank you for reading! :D

[anonymous]

Thanks for writing this! It was well written with some mistakes that were barely noticeable that if you didn't say so, pretty sure people would have assumed it is your first language!（*・∀・）ノシ　I look forward to your future pieces!(ﾉ)･ω･(ヾ)

[plouff]

really?! thank you! :D I'll make sure to reread my next post extra thoroughly before posting it!

If it's not too much to ask, could you tell me what kind of mistakes I made, grammar or spelling or something else..?

[anonymous]

so great!!! you are really talented. i really want a fanfic that lu cang being the seme where he is topping jing.

[plouff]

Thank you!
I'll see what I can do for your phantasm ;p