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mlina September 3 2010, 13:09:38 UTC
I haven't been vocal in a fandom in a long time, but I just wanted to let you know that this is an incredibly beautiful fic and I am stuffing this in my memories. <3

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joyfraser September 3 2010, 19:55:58 UTC
Thank you so much :)

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greenconverses September 3 2010, 14:09:20 UTC
Love love love this. You write Johanna so well, and I can definitely see this happening after the books end.

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joyfraser September 3 2010, 19:56:12 UTC
Thank you! I appreciate it.

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psychedelic_aya September 3 2010, 16:09:13 UTC
This was beautiful and bittersweet in every word. Here are the lines I love the most:

“If I could swim.” She reiterates. But she can’t. She’ll never be able to again, she thinks. She still can’t even step in the shower.

“Johanna,” Annie says, staring at her intently, but not with anger or hurt, “I can swim.”

I teared up a little at it.

Great fic, definitely going to my memories.

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joyfraser September 3 2010, 19:56:55 UTC
I don't know if writers are supposed to favor bits of their own writing but that was by far my favorite line as well. Thank you <3

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rosegilmore September 3 2010, 20:47:49 UTC
This is so perfect and beautiful and sad. Perfect.

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joyfraser September 3 2010, 20:49:53 UTC
Thank you.

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rosegilmore September 3 2010, 20:55:14 UTC
Have you ever written anything else for THG?

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joyfraser September 3 2010, 20:59:50 UTC
I wrote a couple fills for THG Drabble Meme and I'd also recommend everything there. I also wrote a fic to accompany my Finnick/Johanna mix but Mockingjay jossed that hard.

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poppypickle September 3 2010, 21:04:20 UTC
This is lovely. I love how you've explored their relationship. <3

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joyfraser September 3 2010, 21:34:41 UTC
Thank you again, I appreciate getting feedback :)

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