Fanfiction: Naruto: Rivulet (Shisui/Sasuke)

May 22, 2010 23:13

Title: Rivulet
Pairing: ShisuiSasuke
A/N: No, I don't know what my problem is. You can thank Mai for this. Warnings for slight smut.
Summary: Itachi leaves. Shisui crumbles. Sasuke scrounges the pieces.
Rating: M
Word Count: 1,903

Can I call you his name? )

fanfiction, uchiha shisui, smut, uchiha sasuke, naruto

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ronsard May 23 2010, 05:02:15 UTC
SOB. It feels so wrong, and yet I couldn't stop reading, goddamn you ;__; Oh Shisui, bb, where did you drop your game? Get in a car and chase down that mofo. Track his credit cards if you have to. Not a stalker, I swear.

Part of me is wondering what the hell is Sasuke's motive in doing this? Is he just trying to work out his pent-up sexual frustration? Why does... his bed smell like Itachi? WHY ARE THEY ALL SO RETARDED? And why did I enjoy reading that scene so much? orz

I think it is only fair to tell you that I have spent most of this (pain-filled) afternoon trolling the net for Shisui/Sasuke fics, and also contemplating some kind of fevered hallucination about a story where Shisui runs away, and then returns just in time to attend Itachi's wedding (which he wasn't invited to) and starts carrying on some kind of shameful affair with Sasuke... AND NOW YOU'VE BROKEN DOWN MY LAST DEFENSE. I may always want to slash them now. I mean, I wouldn't want to, but some part of me would still be all, "Go on. Do iiiiiit. Remember that fic Cj ( ... )

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pochibubblytea May 23 2010, 08:15:01 UTC
Ultimate revenge again Itachi, bone his brother. His innocent, little baby brother. Itachi would flip the fuck out xD

I think, first, Sasuke was always jealous of Shisui for getting Itachi's attention, so this was at least a chance to somehow get anyone's attention. Sasuke can be a manipulative little jerk, this is very true. While I ship NaruSasu (because Sasuke deserves to be beat sometimes), I still feel like Sasuke can be an undeserving asshole, and Naruto would still love him unconditionally. So with something to go downstairs and whine and cry about, he'd steal the spotlight for a little while and Naruto would have to pay attention to him.

Not to mention Sasuke's probably a little incestuous with Itachi, so messing around with Shisui could be a good chance to get back at Itachi for leaving, since he's his only friend and 'most special person <3 <3 <3.'

Shisui/Sasuke was kind of fun to write ;-; fuckfuckfuckiwannawritemoarITACHI WOULD WALK BACK TO STRAIGHTEN HIS TUX, ONLY TO FIND SHISUI FUCKING SASUKE ON THE BUREAU, AND HEAR ( ... )

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ronsard May 23 2010, 14:52:47 UTC
More like his jerkass, crazy-as-hell brother. One of the lines I've managed to write (seriously) goes something like: "Sasuke, it turned out, would be his key into the house, sneaking Shisui in through the same back window and into his bed, in the spacious room that had once been his and Itachi's, in order to claim victory in having seduced him." Skank.

Also, I think Itachi is marrying Hinata, Shisui's only confidante from childhood, so really it's all a big mess. What is happening to my brain?

Like Sasuke even needs to try to get Naruto's attention, anyway. Isn't it the other way around? Naruto probably did start regretting bringing Shisui along when he saw him go upstairs with Sasuke.

I need to go... do something else now, because this obsession is skirting dangerously close to okay-ing ItaSasu, and I can't live with that D:

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pochibubblytea May 23 2010, 20:36:58 UTC
HAHA. So you're really writing it? Ace! This is going to be fucking fantastic. Please bear my chilren ;w; Sasuke is such a little power hungry skank. This is true fact.

Hinata xD She's never really stood out to me much as a character, but I can see annnny Uchiha marrying her before any other girl in the village, as she can shut up and if you squint, the dark hair might make her look like one of their male relatives.

AU Sasuke's always make me feel like they'd be even more selfish than canon Sasuke. Since it would be 'okay' to make friends and all that jazz, I feel like he'd be ridiculously possessive of Naruto, and since Naruto didn't grow up attention starved, he'd be pretty laid back and chill.

I've already okayed it. It's too late, go on without me, I won't make it!

Alsooooo, I thought about a new story idea whilst at work today. Semi-AU Shisui/Itachi, with everyone's gender switched. I've never written genderswitch before, and they'd make such pretty girls! ;-;

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anat_astarte May 23 2010, 05:43:15 UTC
Wow, I never read a ShiSasu before! Oh you Uchiha, what a messed up little bunch! but that's why I love you all so much

Great fic ♥

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theirempires May 23 2010, 06:17:04 UTC
This is so, so wrong, but also so, so right. I'm dying. The Uchihas are to blame for screwing up my mind like this. At some point since my obsession with Ita/Shi started, I have accepted that any Uchiha can be paired with another. It's ridiculous.

ILU for writing this. :D

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pochibubblytea May 23 2010, 20:40:08 UTC
The Weasleys in Harry Potter screwed up my mind. You can't write HP without it being incest, evvvveryone is related. Half of the incest is canon, for pete's sake.

Uchiha are just a big fest of baby making. I don't know how it happened, but I'm sure it's all the fangirls Kishimoto's fault :

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pochibubblytea May 23 2010, 21:26:22 UTC
But mostly blame Mai. It's hurt fault, she tempts me.

I can never ever turn down requests xD;

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