bad depressing poetry that im totally gonna regret posting for the world to see....

[pocket_of_stars]

Alone
appropriate to spell it
with a capital A
should i add the capital E?
AlonE
why don't i just make the whole god damn word capital?
ALONE
good. thats better.
it should all be emphasized
because when your heart feels it,
your life feels it.

Comments

[last_impression]

By saying it's bad poetry, you're just looking for people to look at the negatives. No one wants to though, Erica. People see more of the good in you than you think, and want to be near you. You're never alone.

And don't be depressed, cheer up. Just look at me and you can laugh, anytime. :D

[darkangel987]

Erica honey, you're never alone! I'm always here when you need me, you know that. Be happy, cause soooo soo many people love you like I do! But remember, I'm your only future wife!

Love you always,
Jen

::cough cough hypocrite::

[utopianpassion]

excuse me, we don't believe in self-deprication here. and it's not bad, and don't regret it.. in fact, i loved it lol. Which works out rather well, since i didn't realize you wrote it until after i read it, and then realized that i love it and i love you. What a combination!!! Lmao and if u followed all that, my darling, then you're never alone with me... i'm here when you need me, and even when you think you don't

"He's saying, it's time to let go. It's going to be ok"
"But how do you know? How do you know something bad isn't going to happen?"
"I don't."

Re: ::cough cough hypocrite::

[pocket_of_stars]

ugh ur the best and i cant even stand it. I love you till the end of the world.

"Because when I'm with you i remember, when I'm with you, Im home."