[One-shot] Tick-tock, tick-tock

Aug 11, 2011 00:39

Title: Tick-tock, tick-tock
Author: crazy_otaku911
Groups/Pairings: Kisumai - Ki/F (+Ishigaki and bits of Taiga-tachi)
Rating: PG
Summary: Striketeam!AU. Fujigaya's recovery is tricky and Kitayama doesn't want to just stand by and watch.
Disclaimer: This work is purely fiction.
Warnings: Slight brokenness on Fujigaya's part.
A/N: A continuation of this, which ( Read more... )

c: ishigaki daisuke, #one-shot, c: fujigaya taisuke, v: striketeam, r: pg, !fanfiction, c: kitayama hiromitsu

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risakochan October 5 2011, 17:34:49 UTC
i never commented after you pointed me to this (when i commented in "there's nothing left to bleed"??!? DD:

i love love love this.. taipi being afraid and broken totally shatters my heart. i want to KILL THE DUDES WHO DID THIS.

please please write more of this verse (since you've named the verse and all XD)

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crazy_otaku911 October 5 2011, 17:55:16 UTC
Haha, totally okay. XD

They're already dead. 8Db! But yeah. x: It's sad, seeing him like this. +_+

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. ♥ (And yes, I'm trying. ;; Haha, it was only supposed to be the one one-shot!)

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ary666 October 25 2011, 21:23:58 UTC
Have to say this is my fav Kisumai fic at date =)

I totally love this verse! Specially the way you write Mitsu *.*. So involved with his boys...=)

And...I know Nika isn't a lot in this one, but I totally love him how couldn't I? He's the Bomb-guy!!!

You'll make me soooo happy if you continue this... Pretty please? *insert pouting Taipi in here xD*

Thank you so much for writing and sharing!

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crazy_otaku911 October 25 2011, 22:19:50 UTC
Awww. T_T That's so sweet of you!

I'm glad you like Nika and Kitayama too ♥ They were totally fun to create! :D

Haha, maybe! I'm rather fond of this verse, so more is totally possible. ♥

Thank you so much for reading and leaving a lovely comment. ♥~

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ary666 October 26 2011, 19:46:48 UTC
Ohhhh you've made my day!!!! *.*

I just cant have enough of them...and I'm really curious about what's going on between Kitayama and Taipi *.*

You're very welcome!! I'll be glad to stalk and comment future fics too xD I'll go stalk previous ones now xD

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crazy_otaku911 October 26 2011, 21:26:16 UTC
Thaaaat... might be explained eventually. xD KitaFuji sprawled out and they're definitely my go-to pair.

Aw, that's sweet of you. I hope you enjoy! \o/

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celightd January 29 2012, 11:23:38 UTC
“Come back, Taisuke… They’re all waiting for you.”

I’m waiting for you.

*sniffs*

i really re-read this AU over and over and over again. Like *idk how many times i have read this anymore* ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

“Taisuke.” It came out as a near hiss as Kitayama reached over, taking Fujigaya’s hand. It was all it took to get Fujigaya scrambling closer, needing to feel something solid and familiar. OH ;__;

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crazy_otaku911 January 29 2012, 22:58:34 UTC
Awww ♥ Thanks, bb! :D I'm super glad you like this AU, it's one of my favoritest creations. x: ♥♥♥

;; And ilthem idek ♥

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mssinachen April 25 2012, 12:27:04 UTC
Oh, a sequel. :) Found it. *totally proud of myself*

my favourite line is: Gently pressing a kiss to the top of Fujigaya’s head, Kitayama closed his eyes, promising again: “I’ll always keep you safe.”
It was soo nice. Broken Fujigaya gets help from his leader. Its sad to imagine him being broken but you managed to bring some hope there.
After all, it was a start. <3
Thanks sooo much for writing. <3

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crazy_otaku911 April 26 2012, 01:52:35 UTC
I have a Striketeam tag, if you want to find anything else ♥

But I have to say thank you SO much for leaving all those comments, it was the best thing to wake up to ♥ Not many people will leave comments on old fics, so it was nice to see someone reading them. :3 ♥

YES I LOVE THEM T_T ♥ Kitayama's a good leader and Fujigaya being broken is sad, but he gets better ;; ♥ He definitely does.

And again, thank you so much. ♥ You made my day. :3

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mssinachen May 4 2012, 18:32:18 UTC
Sure, I will come by once I have time again. I have a lot going on in RL lately.
I will comment on the fics I read, okay? :)
Im happy that Taisuke is getting better. :) And Kitamitsu doing his best for his team. <3

Never mind, youre so very welcome. :)
Im happy youre happy. <3
*hugs and kisses*
<3

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mssinachen May 4 2012, 18:33:19 UTC
P.S. Im sure a lot of people are reading the fics but I guess many people are too lazy to comment. :/
I comment on every fic I like, though. <3

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yume16 April 30 2015, 16:07:07 UTC
*insert incoherent babbling here* My feels are all over the place. This is just <3

It is absolutely heartbreaking. I can't imagine the fear Fujigaya must suffer. It's so raw and painful. And then there is Kitayama. I loved him badass, but now I love him even more because he is exactly what Fujigaya needs. He is simply there and he cares. This makes it so bittersweet and I felt myself how the tension unknotted as Kitayama called him Taisuke. The timing is fantastic. Moreover, it tells me so much about their relationship and how they work. I want Taisuke to recover soon, but of course I know it will take time.
I really love this verse. It's so intense and emotional. Your writing style is really great.

Thank you for sharing.

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