[Snibble] Sunburst

Sep 04, 2011 22:41

Title: Sunburst
Info: Yara/Yamamoto - Snippet
467w; PG - For yararanger since there is never enough YaraRyo in the world. Related to a very strange dream I had and there might be more, but there might not, seeing as this is a disjointed mess. ♥

Go to Neverland. )

c: yara tomoyuki, #snibble, v: starchild, r: pg, !fanfiction, c: yamamoto ryouta

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yararanger September 5 2011, 13:30:41 UTC
omg you wrote it as an actual written thing ;o;

I read this on my phone when I woke up (before I even saw you were still awake agjakhgj) and had to wait until I had time to write a proper reply (i.e. now) because ;~; ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Slowly, as if an invisible string was pulling at him, Yara’s gaze was drawn his side, at the space to his left.
...it took me until this second read-through to even realise you'd specifically mentioned Ryouta was lying to his left x_X I totally pictured them lying like that without even realising XD; ♥♥♥

It was that moment of catch, when Yara felt like the time would freeze.
I can practically feel things focussing closely and like... everything stopping for a heartbeat and Yara holding his breath without even realising he's doing it ;~;

;A; *wants to cuddle Ryouta too* ← well, both of them :<

and the end ("Tomo" adkgjhafhjgsfa) is just like a warm blanket, all reassuring and comforting and omg the totally most perfect thing to read on waking up ;~; *wibble* ilu ;_; ♥

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crazy_otaku911 September 5 2011, 19:35:59 UTC
... what else would I write it in~

/late, late, laaaate, la.

*sits in your brain and stays there*

I love you too and I feel so monosyllabic but ♥ Nyannnnn, I'm glad you liked it and that it was warm (and hot choolate) and... ♥ ilu

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mbdancer8o8 February 23 2012, 04:53:08 UTC

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crazy_otaku911 February 24 2012, 01:55:23 UTC
;o;! ♥ I'm glad you liked the verse, despite how messy and disjointed the whole thing is.

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥♥♥

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