[One-shot] Labels

[goodbyelover]

Labels
HSJ - Takaki, slight Takaki/Inoo, cameos from the rest of BEST
1057 words, PG, AU, 2nd person

de·fine [dih-fahyn] verb, de·fined, de·fin·ing.
verb (used with object)
1. to explain or identify the nature or essential qualities of; describe

"The whole is greater than the sum of its parts." - Aristotle

Takaki was more than just his label.

Comments

[a_mashihita]

Wow ..., this is awesome ...

[goodbyelover]

Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it <3

[a_mashihita]

CanI add you?

[goodbyelover]

Sure. :3

[goodbyelover]

Thanks ;o;! I admit I've never really read a proper 2nd person, so it's weird and a bit unnerving to write in it? ;; But I'm glad you liked it! <3

[fiz_autumn]

Nice story.. (^_^)b

[goodbyelover]

Thank you :3 I'm glad you liked it <3

[ext_1497137]

2nd person always invokes such a deep and somber mood i feel and you have worked that perfectly here, in so few words even. i really like your writing! :D

[goodbyelover]

For some reason I fall into a 2nd person mood every few months. It's strange to work with, because all I've read of it are those choose your own adventure type books, which are kind of terrible XD;; but sometimes it just seems to work! And thank you so much ;; (I'm super self conscious about my writing right now so XD;;; /sheepish)

[ggyuzizi]

I really liked this one!
The way they say their names in the end gave me goosebumps.

I know it's somehow late, reading all your fics in 2014, but I felt the need to comment to tell you I'm loving them all.

Thank you so much for writing this beautifully! :)

[goodbyelover]

omg THANK YOU ;o; This is one of those ones where I was in partial agony over ♥

Never too late, yo :D THOUGH TBH I HOPE YOU DID NOT DELVE TOO FAR BACK as I used to be a really terrible writer XD;;

But thank you so much for taking the time to read! (And apologies for my reply being a tad late. ;;)