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Chuunin Challenge part THREE.

Aug 26, 2011 20:22

If LJ had a face, I'd punch it.

Title: Tell Me A Story part trois
Author: pockyphoto

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naruto, fanfiction, tell me a story, kakashi/sakura, chuunin challenge

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pockyphoto August 28 2011, 06:07:07 UTC

thanks nims~ <3

missyquill August 28 2011, 06:08:27 UTC

Very well done, this is so adorable! And Gai at the end is just perfect! XD Good luck for the contest, you guys!

pockyphoto August 28 2011, 13:19:36 UTC

thanks missy!

flametwirler August 31 2011, 06:32:10 UTC

Oh my goodness, I can only imagine the amazingly horrific hijinks that Naruto would get into whilst under Gai's tutelage. The carnage would be epic. (Could you just imagine them trying to outdo each other? haha)

And Evil Bad Guy and Harou's refusing to let Kakashi retell the story 'correctly', it's all quite charming, really. Lovely ending to a cute family tale.