Havemercy Fic - Crossing the Line (4/28)

[podicus]

Title: Crossing The Line
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,635 for this chapter
Disclaimer: All recognisable characters belong to the wonderful Jaida Jones and Danielle Bennett, although there may be one or two of my own creation :)
Summary: When he decides to search for an art tutor, little does sixteen year old Etienne know that he's about to embark on an

Comments

[caityjay]

A small voice warned me that this might develop into a problem.

Heeeeeeeee.... :3

Love! :D Sunday... is so far away... *sobs*

(Random note: when the word "Dad" is used as a proper noun, it ought to be capitalized. The only time it shouldn't be is if he says "my dad".)

[podicus]

:D

Ah, thank you! I wondered whether it should be capitalised. I've edited it now, hopefully I've done it right :)

[epithalamium]

Jude! Juuuuuuuude! He's just so cute. I love how impatient/bored he is--you know, that sort of Hal-mind that is quick and imaginative, but doesn't really have enough material thrown at it, since he lives in a country and knows only a handful of people. (I am so glad there are 20+ chapters more for me to read. XD)

[podicus]

Jude is the sweetest :)
Thanks again!