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Dec 19, 2004 00:15

I dance
with the reflective delusional
dress
Despair hangs daily in her closet
After a waltz
with us
who need
to come back through the many
clouddancers, and night lights of the sky
back, back, back
to the solitary confines
of reality

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rylessmiles December 19 2004, 06:03:09 UTC
IM quoting the whole poem "<3"
^--> "<3" = your poem i qouted...:D

It was just so entrancing...
the words fit superbly and it sank together all so well.
I will say it was written beautifully..not even i could have done better...love you mucho mucho MUCHO!!!
xoxo ryles <3

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darkenedjewel March 4 2005, 10:51:14 UTC
"back, back, back
to the solitary confines
of reality"

wow

wow

wow...

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poemsbyspell March 4 2005, 14:02:30 UTC
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