Inspiration

[poetblue]

pragmatism pays

Comments

[dreamdancer134]

I like your poem, esp. the first and last stanzas. It reminds
me of my own logistical life at times. I also really like the line
"5am wakeups and racketball at 7" I like the way it sounds, the images
it evokes, like London area country clubs or something... and I also
really like the abstract meets reality feel of "and so she casts away
errant commas."

[dreamdancer134]

I owe inspiration to you and this poem for a line in my most recent poem. The phrase "5:30 am graphs..." : )