a poem i just wrote.

[poetgirl33]

ok so this poem is driving me mad. i need some help with what it is/what to do with it. poetry nerds i am looking at you!
all two of you.

Comments

[alexisfromtexas]

I think that "on to" in the 3rd stanza should be one word. But I could be wrong and then I will be embarrassed for trying to correct it.

[poetgirl33]

youre right! but that is not the kind of help i meant!

[alexisfromtexas]

I know. I would totally help you but i'm only good at dirty xxx poetry, just ask Liz.

[supercaso]

Hey. I like this poem a lot, and have some things to say about it. I just need to wait until finals are over before I can say them. So know that ideas are coming, and I will be finished with finals after Tuesday night so that you can get those ideas.

-Casey

[poetgirl33]

man i would like it if you would help me out. that poem is pure poison for my psyche.

[supercaso]

I'm so sorry it took me so long. I honestly forgot after I got back in town