Just as long as...(Poem that i just wrote...)

[poetic_fable]

(Through the bloody eyes of a 14 year old boy who is beaten

Comments

[silver_stories]

it was pretty good, quite vivid. i dunno if u meant to put them in the order they were in, but the stronger images should b unveiled at the end, i think w/ keeping the last line. sorry, went into critique mode. u know i have a license. either way, its all good. i wrote a poem about a neglected boy. i think u read it last year.

[bennyboy0627]

I LOVE THIS POEM!, it has so many deeper meanings, it makes me understand. Your such a good poet, your gonna make it GIRL!

[onelife2live4]

that poem was incredible, you have the most amazing way with words, i would like an autographed copy of your poetry book one day--