ENEMIES

Mar 15, 2006 03:04

going in
for morning bell
the tone that always rings
the note that raises
flood swells up
and brings passings
of kings;
below the squalid
city streets
a lonesome dove,
she sings
the note that raised
the flood swells up
that wiped these
gray streets clean

... a work in progress? maybe i'll add more at some point. i like it as is though...

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returntomeaning March 15 2006, 20:37:46 UTC
i like it. it's good.

two months until i'm out of this place.

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poetic_fire March 20 2006, 07:14:16 UTC
thank you. looking forward to having you back. :-D

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grotesquevoice March 16 2006, 10:25:04 UTC
thank goodness for inspiration.. and bathtubs full whiskey..
Danny is brilliant for that idea.
Your writing is good, you know I think you writing style is unique and all, though I don’t suggest you stop anytime soon.. ^_^

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poetic_fire March 20 2006, 07:15:08 UTC
don't worry. i won't. once i get off my lazy ass i'll actually post a few that i haven't yet. more recent stuff. hopefully i can find everything i want.

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______blackout March 23 2006, 15:30:37 UTC
those are some beautiful dolls

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poetic_fire March 23 2006, 23:16:33 UTC
thanks i guess... i did some random weird google search for something having to do with frogs and thats what i got, so i posted it on there. i don't really know why, but i think the last statement might have something to do with it.

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