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Oct 16, 2004 18:40
later she twirled her hair and suggested dinner
though both knew that childhood behind the apple tree
was fleeting at best
some torn smiles should stay that way; curving around gnarled limbs and overgrown shrubbery
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jerichozo
October 16 2004, 21:06:30 UTC
The last line is very very beautiful.
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poetic_whim
October 17 2004, 12:09:44 UTC
thank you.
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