a two-'fer (too/fur, to/for, two/four?)

[poetrees]

wot do you do when one of your editors thinks these are great/done and the other, uh, not at all in any way? post 'em locked. i guess.

Comments

[doxasticpirate]

"Little lamb, who made thee.... into a book"

Pretty awesome.

[neblinita]

"Hair" is perfectly perfect. You're wonderful.

[monkeyman]

I have to weigh in on the 'done' side of the argument. I don't think there's much you could be reworking in either of these -- and you know I'd say so if I did.

(Of course, you also know that I'm head-over-heels foolish for your words, delightful poetess.)