Why do I want you Back?

[poetry_girl124]

Why do I want you back, after the way you

treated me?

you don't call or email anymore sometimes I think

you forgot about me.

you treat every girl you go out with

like trash.

why do I even want a man like you back?

I can't help but loving you, the more we are

apart the more I love you.

sometimes I don't even know if you are alive.

why did you ruin

Comments

[peacegirl1960s]

I would died for someone that I love so much.

[poetry_girl124]

ya thats how I feel

[peacegirl1960s]

yeah

[lost_brokensoul]

the poem is really good. one bit advice though is to work on the rythm so that it flows better. And yes i do love someone so much that i would die for them

hey

[poetry_girl124]

thanks ya I know I just couldn't think of a rythm to go with it just kinda all spilled out.

[pink__floyd]

Love is joy, and love is pain. And once you experience it, you are never the same.

[poetry_girl124]

ya tell me about it thats totally true.

[__stupify__]

Absolutely, positively, yes. Going through it right now. No worse pain have I ever felt in my life...

[poetry_girl124]

ya I think everyone has fallen in love sometime.

[__stupify__]

I definitely agree...though I am sure that what I got is way worse than that. LOL. I fell in love and it opened a can of whoop ass on me!

[poetry_girl124]

hey don't mean to pry but why do you say that?