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[poetryismyweapn]

Hypocrisy is the path upon which we all stumble

Comments

[squid007]

That was great. It was just fluid.

[attributed]

Thanks it... did okay, I guess. Just wanted to make sure I got on this comment quick because I let the last one fade into non-existance. Not enough concentration and too much to do. It's really better, imo, a bit further back on this journal. I'm trying lately to see about recording some things but none of them are hitting on all cylinders yet. Anyhow; welcome to the show and all that jazz.

[squid007]

Ah. When you say 'recording', do you mean recording your poetry, or [insert alternative]. Sorry, my brain's not functioning right now. ;)

And yeah, I just like the style. I've been fooling around with rhyming now, but I just want to go back to free verse.
Oh and thanks, methinks. ^_^

[attributed]

Well, I think recording certain types of videos *cough* is only for when the fame falters.. not before you're famous. So yeah, poetry. ;~P
See... the lovely thing is that if you do it right... you can do free verse and sometimes still rhyme. Sometimes the flow interjects itself.