Great scary story but man. Disturbing. Somehow this short bit of writing conjures up a whole bunch of mental images, making it work even better. Well told, green.
Oddly enough, by mind refuses to read it as "just a crime", and turns it into something much more sinister. It just doesn't want to tell me what exactly.
More figuratively, I guess? Like that the woman was being held up in the mugging sense, in some sort of awkward hush hush "WE'LL SHOOT YOU IF YOU SAY ANYTHING" manner, as maybe part of a "TAKE US TO YOUR HOME AND GIVE US YOUR VALUABLES" plot, and that she would be dead if they didn't call the police and help her out.
Then I was reading the story to a friend and they were like "WAIT SO THEY'RE CARTING A CORPSE AROUND?" and I'm like "...whoa what? OH GOD YOU'RE RIGHT, I CAN'T READ."
Honestly, the way I took it originally was scary enough for me. :x
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Great scary story but man. Disturbing. Somehow this short bit of writing conjures up a whole bunch of mental images, making it work even better. Well told, green.
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Or vampires.
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Then I was reading the story to a friend and they were like "WAIT SO THEY'RE CARTING A CORPSE AROUND?" and I'm like "...whoa what? OH GOD YOU'RE RIGHT, I CAN'T READ."
Honestly, the way I took it originally was scary enough for me. :x
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