Tyrant fanfic: Unspoken Words

[pofika]

Acknowledgement: The characters found in this story are the sole property of Takanaga Hinako. I just hope that she could forgive me what I have done with them if she would know about it. Sorry, Sensei.Title: Unspoken Words
Author: pofika
Warnings: Blood, broken bone, some bad language, mild erotic narration, and if “sentimental” is a warning then

Comments

[mihaelitka]

I really liked it! Good work! I hope you continue writing :) First attempt and it was so good, thumbs up!

[pofika]

I'll do my best for the next. Thanks for your feedback, I can use to this :)

[yaoilovefan]

Sorry it took me so long to get to read this story. XD

[pofika]

I’m exactly like you when it comes to criticize, so I understand

[yaoilovefan]

Oh my! My own fault! XD
I was feeling down when I wrote "I only wanted to be loved" so I understand that your mood affects the story quite a bit.
I want to write something angsty (a one shot perhaps) but I'm not "in the mood" to do so. XD
Well, if you enjoy writing then by all means, do so. ^-^ It's always nice to know other people write fics to Tyrant as well.

[pofika]

Angst… I don’t want to cry. Though my mood lately is such as that. I’ll get better and keep writing. The reverse is true too, writing funny story can effect your mood for the better so that’s what I’m going to do; try at least.

[yaoilovefan]

Good luck!

P.S. I need to confirm I'm human when I post a comment. XD I wonder why's that. >.< hmm... maybe you have some things turned on or something? and if not you should make the staff of LJ know that something like that is happening if I'm not the only one to have that problem. o.o

[pofika]

Nobody made any comment about it before, but maybe now that they can read yours others will tell me too about this. I’ll check what it can be. I’m not too familiar with these things though.

The other annoying thing is that with every comments, I get the whole oneshot back in the email. Do you know what should I do to prevent that? You have more experience than I.
Thanks.

[yaoilovefan]

I don't believe you can do anything about it. I get my chapters in the mail always too. I just open it, click on "your entry" and see what the comment is on my LiveJournal page. Well, sometimes I just scroll the chapter in the mail and see the comment there if I don't have the time to do much more. XD
So, if you won't find a way to go around it, you'll just have to get used to it. I haven't tried to find a way to change it, I don't mind. At least I know to what chapter or story I recieved the comment. You may even find it helpfull when you have more stories. XD

P.S. I got the "Please confirm you are a human below" again. XD

[lilmiyavi]

I read your story.
It´s an interesting one :)
It´s not my biggest hoppy to read fanfics - to say it more clearly: I really don´t like reading fanfics very much.

But this one was nice :)
You made a few spelling mistakes - but thats not a big problem (just wanted to tell you) (I´m sure I hava a lot too - I´m German XD)

It was nice to look so deep in Senpais mind.
I was shocked at first.. Morinagas broken nose - I could have killed Senpai for his selfishness - but in the end I thought - if there would really be a so long manga-story about the tyrant who falls in love.. then I think Senpai would NEVER say "I love you" to him without an accident.

He would only say it if something terrible would happen to Morinaga. For example a deadly disease, a horrible accident.. And he would even more say it if it was Senpais fault.
So in the end I have to say: It´s a great story.
You did great and I liked it :)

[pofika]

Thanks for your lovely words.
I do like fanfic when it’s good, and sometimes fans make up some nice stories and write surprisingly well. The problem is that I don’t have much time to read them. And though my English is not good enough my brain produce stories which are wanted out and I hope I can write them just good enough to be enjoyed by the Tyrant fans.
I’m writing another story, need a few more months to finish it (then proofread it). I didn’t have a proofreader for my first, but next time I’ll ask somebody. I hate stupid mistakes, and my grammatical oddities also need checking.
I’m glad you like Unspoken words, especially that you are not a big fan of funfics :-)

[lilmiyavi]

Oh god!
I wrote hoPPy ... EMBARRASSING!!!
I mean hoBBy ... >_________<

Oh really?
Tell me when your next fic is ready, I´ll read it :)

[pofika]

Ah, don’t worry about it, I figured what you meant.
OK, I’ll let you know :-)
Thanks again.