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May 26, 2007 22:23

Sorry about the wait, but at least it wasn't... what... two months this time? XD I will definitely have a report up tomorrow, too ( Read more... )

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kanthia May 27 2007, 04:51:44 UTC
The rating for this fic is so pertinent it hurts.

We missed you~♥

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banzaisebastian May 27 2007, 07:38:12 UTC
You know, I thought the title sounded familiar, and then as soon as I saw the sample, I instantly realized I blasted it already. XD I thought the girl had a Sueish quality about her, personally, although I dropped it because it's just so damn hard to tell when 98% of the badfic involves characters with less personality than a doorstop just talking.

That and I was too busy making fun of the author's illiteracy. And choice of Pokemon nicknames. ([snicker] Buttons.) And, well, waiting for someone to lay the smackdown on Rose for calling the most respected citizen of Pallet Town "Oakie."

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Adding... banzaisebastian May 27 2007, 07:41:08 UTC
So, yeah, I agree with you wholeheartedly with this review. Yay for obscuring Sueism with a WTF plot and little actual characterization?

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ameliorer May 27 2007, 13:10:47 UTC
Sorry, I probably shouldn't take up precious space to do this, but..

What other than that would she of said than.
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Other possibilities:

"I'm hungry."
"Get off my territory, jerk!"
"You smell funny."
"You look funny."
"I need to pee."
"You don't look like a Spearow."
"I am the almighty Empress of the Emerald Forest. You will swear fealty to me or suffer the consequences."
That's great XDD

Seriously, though, that's really a cliché: a Pokémon coming along just because. Then again, this is Ash and company that we're talking about, so I'm not sure whether to call that canon or convenient.
.. Here here.

I also love how nobody commented after that post. (I'm going to assume it's yours, but if it's not, I'm sorry. I have a tendancy of making mistakes like that. XD)

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banzaisebastian May 27 2007, 16:19:00 UTC
Thank you. Yep, it's mine, and yep, I was amused by that too. I think I accidentally scared the author off our board, no less. XD

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bombsey May 27 2007, 09:42:34 UTC
You could spork just about any story by spunky little eevee [repeat offender lolz =( ]

Link to the profile of doom: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1092671/

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ameliorer May 27 2007, 12:49:08 UTC
We've already had Spunky Lil Eevee. Then there was a whole thing where she was willing to change and we gave her grammar tips and stuff. I don't know what happened to that..

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bombsey May 27 2007, 15:04:12 UTC
All lies. She needs to be sporked again.

=P

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karma_kalisutah May 27 2007, 23:37:48 UTC
Pokémon_Sues! Look what I did!

Do I get a cookie?

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pokemon_sues May 28 2007, 02:19:20 UTC
Amazing.

You don't get a cookie, but you DO get this macro I made just for the occasion!


... )

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karma_kalisutah May 28 2007, 02:46:49 UTC
Aw, why thank you!

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anonymous June 9 2007, 03:46:35 UTC
haha! new species? i'm a new species too!

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