GFUGFGJJKfh UGH THIS~ THIS IS UTTER PERFECTION~ LIKE REALLY REALLY REALLY!!!!!! No kidding :/ and you know how much I adore TofuHo! XD But this~ is just AMAZING~ you're amazing~ ♥ (although technically the cigarette would have to be in Kibum's mouth when he's lighting it ;) you have to inhale to light one... XD)
yeah Kibum smoking :/ sounds kinda hot to me T__T; even though its so bad for you~ guys look so hot smoking!!!!
I think this was amazing~ you should write TofuHo for me!!! :DDD and don't feel down~ ♥ *HUGS* you write so well~~~ :DDD just make yourself write? lol.
no I'm not too nice~ this was just so beautiful and poetic~ ♥
no~ YOU'RE AMAZING~~~ ♥♥♥
well idk if I explained that clearly or not? thats good if you're clueless about smoking :DDD ♥
ulzzangs? please enlighten your stupid unnie D: who doesnt know what that means~ *fails*
*pats* I am sorry you were bored? :(
thank you ;__; and I wanna try and write you JongKey (would you prefer fluff or smut? lol. I dont really do angst :///) lolll thank you~~~ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ (I am so hyper~ after seeing Jinki's ass raping musical scene LOL and the kiss scene~~~ ♥) *insane*
/doesnt wanna argue anymore cuz I know this will just go back and forth. LOL.
Ulzzangs...are pretty people. LOL.
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hahah its fine. XDD
I will beta after i clean my room. fuck i should get off teh computer now. xD And lol. it's fine. I can wait. I've been making you wait too. -.- Fluff or smut will do, I don't really care. XD
AAAAAAAA... I love you. I don't know that you'll make this fic. So I am really happy, and the fact you remember I am the onew asking makes my day. <3
Oh about the fic, cigarettes.. is a big no for me. But, well this is a fic, and Kibum's the one smoking. And he's HOT. So it's okay. I love it. Ahaha..
I love the way you decribed the prefectionist side of Key, but he found he loved Onew and his imperfection.
I read the other comments and you mentioned the umbrella scene, waah.. Just imagining the idea already makes me happy. Kkk.. Onew offering Kibum umbrella is sweet. <3
omg I love this! it's so... awesome! I wanted to say perfect but it seems ironic since that's the fanfic name haha. but I can really see them being like this in real life! (hopefully minus the smoking Key, but the other things...) xD thank you for writing it! <3
Oh~ oh~ first of all, I like how everything seems silent and passing but all the while detailed also as how Key observes things around him. And of course that boy seems to blind him, completely so, completely so.
The repetitions were contagious and I love it. The rhythm of your writing seems like a song~ *w*
I also think Key is a bit of a perfectionist, that's why I love this line:
He fumbles with scissors in hand, Snip snip, hair clips between his lips, and eyes trailing towards the small back of the disappearing boy. He almost doesn't notice that he cuts off a centimeter shorter on one side. Fix it, fix it.
okay, rambling. I really loved this! Thanks for sharing~ ^^
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(although technically the cigarette would have to be in Kibum's mouth when he's lighting it ;) you have to inhale to light one... XD)
yeah Kibum smoking :/ sounds kinda hot to me T__T; even though its so bad for you~ guys look so hot smoking!!!!
I think this was amazing~
you should write TofuHo for me!!! :DDD and don't feel down~ ♥ *HUGS* you write so well~~~ :DDD just make yourself write? lol.
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NO, YOU'RE amazing. 8D
and LOL. I see. LMFAOO. I'll keep that in mind for next time. shows how clueless I am about the whole smoking thing? XDD
and IKR~?! LOL. SPECIALLY THE ULZZANGS. OMG. @.@
this was a product of boredom. T^T
and I will write you TofuHo. 8D That's next on my list. kekeke. ♥
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no~ YOU'RE AMAZING~~~ ♥♥♥
well idk if I explained that clearly or not? thats good if you're clueless about smoking :DDD ♥
ulzzangs? please enlighten your stupid unnie D: who doesnt know what that means~ *fails*
*pats* I am sorry you were bored? :(
thank you ;__; and I wanna try and write you JongKey (would you prefer fluff or smut? lol. I dont really do angst :///) lolll
thank you~~~ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
(I am so hyper~ after seeing Jinki's ass raping musical scene LOL and the kiss scene~~~ ♥) *insane*
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/doesnt wanna argue anymore cuz I know this will just go back and forth. LOL.
Ulzzangs...are pretty people. LOL.
fuckyeahulzzangs.tumblr.com
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hahah its fine. XDD
I will beta after i clean my room. fuck i should get off teh computer now. xD And lol. it's fine. I can wait. I've been making you wait too. -.- Fluff or smut will do, I don't really care. XD
and OMG. YES. LMFAOOO. ♥♥♥
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I love you.
I don't know that you'll make this fic. So I am really happy, and the fact you remember I am the onew asking makes my day. <3
Oh about the fic, cigarettes.. is a big no for me. But, well this is a fic, and Kibum's the one smoking. And he's HOT. So it's okay. I love it. Ahaha..
I love the way you decribed the prefectionist side of Key, but he found he loved Onew and his imperfection.
I read the other comments and you mentioned the umbrella scene, waah.. Just imagining the idea already makes me happy. Kkk.. Onew offering Kibum umbrella is sweet. <3
tyvm bb <3
*btw, i'm sorry i'm not good at commenting*
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and LOL. yes. I remembered you were the onew who asked for it. xDD
hahah yeah. it's just a fic. hopefully. ^^" But YES. HE IS, RIGHT? 8D
yepp. Because OnKey is just like that. xP
hahahah yeah. That was supposed to happen. Never did. /fails
np at all, bby~ and that's okay, I have my share of crappy incoherent comments. xD This one's perfectly fine~ ^^ ♥♥♥
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thank you for writing it! <3
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and lol. not even. I see perfectionist!Key. but other than that my characterizations suck ass. LMAO.
and np at all~ ^^ ♥
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The repetitions were contagious and I love it. The rhythm of your writing seems like a song~ *w*
I also think Key is a bit of a perfectionist, that's why I love this line:
He fumbles with scissors in hand, Snip snip, hair clips between his lips, and eyes trailing towards the small back of the disappearing boy. He almost doesn't notice that he cuts off a centimeter shorter on one side. Fix it, fix it.
okay, rambling.
I really loved this!
Thanks for sharing~ ^^
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I don't even know where I was headed with this fic. I kinds of just...wrote it. @.@
but lol. I appreciate that you liked the repetition. I thought it was kind of annoying. XD
and omg. you quoted! ♥ Tbh I was reading that part over and over again last night, I think it'smy favourite line too~ :3
it's fine, not rambling at all. ^^
and no problem at all, thank you so much for reading and commenting!:D
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